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My vote on this thing
Punches: Smiley "dude your WACK AS SHIT, your IQ is kinda like the equivalence of a STACK AH BRICKS" That line was very nice and To-Face did not have any punches that strong.

Open: Smiley got him on this department because to face was very simple and dull but smiley just came in sharp.

Metaphors: I saw none really I could not nobody really painted a picture for me.

Structure: Smiley hey to-face put somemore effort dog

Close: Smiley got him

Winner: Smiley

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well this is no question who ta vote for 2face didnt even realy battle he jus wrote like five lines you need ta write more kid thats illegal son

every aspect of this battle goes to
vote

verse towers over the other it was way more comlex and actualy had puches in it.

To-Face man you stuff was very very basic had no punches
I suggest goin to the tutorial board. Learn the basics then come back an try again

has got my vote if I could vote
Im takin time on your stuff so take some on mine please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104380

an this one has been up for like a week its close to being over so help me out here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103568

thanks

listen up, multiz don't count if ya rhymes pathetic,
sweat-it, the technique couldn't get any better,
my rhymes stone cold, you light as a feather,
sometimes yo rhymes make me wanna question
ya gender, cause deciple peep this recital desses,
ya 3r style, reduce, reuse, recycle,
its like tribal like, waves and titals goin homicidal
on this wanna be rap idol, pro? you dont deserve that tittle
this beef messgae is final, come on with best punches
evn the weakest MC could drive you suicidal.
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yo you need some elavation...
punches were weak...
personals where ok barely...
flow/ok
style/nope
meta/nope
multi/barely but weak...
overall/a 4 out of 10...4/10...
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lol.. lets have a little bit of fun with this

I'll GRAB AH STICK, shatter and CRACK YA RIBS
dude your WACK AS SHIT, your IQ is kinda like the equivalence of a STACK AH BRICKS
you've got a LACK AH WITTS, shit even SLAYED CORNS DISS YOU
seen your pic and you bout look perfect for centerfolds of GAY PORN ISSUES
dude you've got a love for anal PENETRATION ,SERIOUS
you claim your a "blood" but only time you see "red" is during your MENESTRATION PERIODS
how the hell you think your gonna DISS THESE RAP SHEETS
when everything you SPIT BE PAST WEAK
your so wack you couldnt make lyrics look "phat" writting a verse on MISSY'S ASS CHEEKS
you THIRST COCKS and i live on a WORST BLOCK
ill beat your ass so fast youll be in the hospital talkin bout take the FIRST SHOT
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wak structure...
decent punches...
decent personals...
flow/off but good...
style/yea had some style...
Injoyment/ok...
overall verse quality...7/10...7 out of 10 score ratio...
peace...

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vote smiley cat


i thought he had the punches..not many from face..not bad but no punches that hit hard

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