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Old 01-06-04, 09:24 PM   #1
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State Of Rap Pt.2 (XLG's Whack)

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Potent Prospect aka Celestal Dialect aka Slik Shadow

WhitLghtnng8: yo do you like XLG?
Potent Prospect: no
Potent Prospect: fuck no
Potent Prospect: they all wack
WhitLghtnng8: what should rb do wit em?
Potent Prospect: murk em all


Yeah You Heard Em....Get The Fuck Out....You The Reason Rap is On The Downfall...I Will Diss You Fuckers Later...For Now...Read Dis...It's Part 2..

Look I'm Back Once Again, Last Responses Simply Bullshit
And You Hurbs Joined When? Woudn't Know Dope Facin' It
Claimin My Situations Played?Since Your Einstein, Write Somethin
Your Flow'n'Structure In Disaray, You Are Finished, Simply A Has Bin
The Longer I Lyrically Write, My Ego Constantly Inflates
My Ability Is Equal Dre's Might, I Encounter Problems, I Simply Obliterate
I Will Move Through Wit Ease, Nothin' In The Way Of What's Rightfully Mine
I'll Act Swiftly Like A Deadly Disease, Step Aside, This Is My Time
Yes I'm Arrogant But I Got The Skills To Prove It, Lookout Niggaz I'm Plastered
Yo Niggas Deserve What Your Gunna Get, My Style's Mastered
See Last Time I Dropped Yall Didn't Read, All Judged Purely Techinical
There Was A Point, A Planted Seed, The Problem's Still Full
Fucking Hurbs Continually Dickride, Might Not Even Have A Single Punch
Future Birthplace Where Rap Died, Breeding Grounds Of A Net Side Lunch
Go Back To Ya Blasters & Discmans, Listen To Pac At His Peakin' Game
He Was Always Motivated, Never Disband, He Knew How To Achieve Fame
He Helped Other Niggaz Elevate, It Wasn't All For His Benefit
Didn't Care About Their Lyrical Weight, He Went Along & Upped His Shit
If He Taught Everything Properly, Than They Were As Good As Him
Didn't Think Twice, He Knew It Surely, Continued To Venture On The Limb
Nigga READ THIS, Take It To Heart, We Need To Lead A Revolution
You Could Be Where This Event Starts, Where Rap Undergoes An Evolution

Speek E.Z
SpeekEeeZee: wtf.. is an xlg.. their so whack i don't know if i should take 2 swings or 1
WhitLghtnng8: i think..it's an xtremely large GANGSTA...
SpeekEeeZee: wanksta =\


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Old 01-06-04, 09:50 PM   #2
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alright this was a pretty good diss.. you had some really good punches.. but i think the best punch was..
SpeekEeeZee: wtf.. is an xlg.. their so whack i don't know if i should take 2 swings or 1
WhitLghtnng8: i think..it's an xtremely large GANGSTA...
SpeekEeeZee: wanksta =\
^^ that had skill damn.. hah jp.. but one concern was why did you talk about pac for like 4 lines.. you could of spent those dissing these herbs some more .. your ending was dope.. and flow seemed on point.. nice work bro
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Old 01-06-04, 10:05 PM   #3
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lol..whack bitch..

uppin
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Old 01-07-04, 07:50 AM   #4
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your vocab is good and so are your punches but it just wasnt ryming well i think if your just worked on your ryming then you could elevate so keep at it.
have a look at my battles and give an honest vote

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Old 01-07-04, 04:51 PM   #5
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