Yo on the real this was a tight battle, although I think Envy Ny could, and should have came a lot stronger. Mr. W. Rite came proper, but I wasn't feelin' his punchlines. Had good word-play, personals were there, but Envy's spit was more effective in my view, close shit. But my vote goes to Ny.
Good shit..

alright well personals way to write, ny came pretty weak in this, although theres not much ya can do in 8 lines...

flow again write, had good rhymes and structure, came together well----ny --Seeing Guns Makes Him Feel Hard-- was a pretty weak line, short and didnt go good with the line before it

vocab and wordplay not too much for vocab in there, but wordplay to mr write, id expect more from someone whos 51-8, but i guess not...

overall thsi battle was pretty much dominated by mr write, i dotn really know if envy wasnt trying or what.

Damn man, its sad to see a vet get kilt by a noob, but shit I'll drop it like this

Brooklyn's Finest…leader of the RB wackness movement...
prewrites..cuts and paste..
too hard man, too hard

His Vocab Skills Says Hes Still Buildin For A Diploma
Like A Pediatrics Office I Pound Em Shots
Now He Wonders Y His Loss Record Popped
Shit, I love that.

Envy's back but cant cope wit the fact ya wack dude...
who says he's dope?...
Got's that right, you dope but not near as dope as the noob dropped it!

So props to Mr. W.rite

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And i would be lying if i said that this site really missed you...
...God said "come as you are" just dont bring Envy with you...

rhyme with the same word......

A G-Unit sneaker really is ugly....be honest.....have you seen 1 they are gay.........


Brooklyn's Finest…leader of the RB wackness movement...
prewrites..cuts and paste..
showing off skills as arts and crafts number one student...

nice line
i started losing you at the end...didnt make sense...

v- envy

Ok this is the wrap from my view.

MR Wrtie came into this wanting it. He hit Envy hard. Nice punches , good flow and ok structure. after reading this i thught Envy woudl come back and kill this guy. With something amazing. What we got was the opposite. A half assed effort. Iv seen a lot better from envy. Hes punches didnt connect that well. It was a very short spit. Honestly Mr Write took this. To my suprise. Its just a honest vote - no hate-

Alright, you would expect more from someone with a record such as envy's, how you people thought he won this dumbfounds me. It is obvious that Mr.W.Rite took this battle he had better punches and flow he just had better punches all around
Brooklyn's Finest…leader of the RB wackness movement...
prewrites..cuts and paste..
showing off skills as arts and crafts number one student...

v/Mr.W.Rite.

And for the kids calling Mr.W.Rite a newbie just because of his record and post account, you should judge people on skill not on how long they have been here so don't be quick to hop on Envy's dick just because of his record.

Ok my view on this battle

Opens: "Envy's back but cant cope wit the fact ya wack dude...
who says he's dope?..." Mr Rite or "Start By Complimenting Dis Herb Wit A Street Sweeper Havin Dis Fag Lookin Uglier Den A G Unit Sneaker (lol)" Envy well I say Envy's was better if y'all disagree y'all hate funny punches then

Punches:"gave him the wrong impression like misspelled tatoo's...
Brooklyn's Finest…leader of the RB wackness movement..." Mr W.Rite or"Havin Dis Fag Lookin Uglier Den A G Unit Sneaker (lol)"
Well those sneakers are ugly as fuck hum TIE

Metaphors: "He Sees He Shines But Yet Has Glaucoma
His Vocab Skills Says Hes Still Buildin For A Diploma" Envy or"...God said "come as you are" just dont bring Envy with you...
Dumbass vet..he'll breeze thru..nah...stick to newbs kid..." TIE

Flow: They both had shit that was easy to follow

Structure: Both were easy on the eyes

Close: Envy "Like A Pediatrics Office I Pound Em Shots
Now He Wonders Y His Loss Record Popped"

Winner because of the open and close by a little hair ENVY

2nd up..need more votes...
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Wow... I read Envy's bragging in the LLL and thought I'd check out some of his battles......

And I can't believe people actually voted for you in this battle. Your best punch of the battle was the G-unit sneakers one.. and that was WACK!
I was really disappointed...



On the other hand, Mr Write came nice as hell. Good punches, wordplay, personals... Nice flip with the last line. Not your average newb....

No hate on either of ya, but Mr Write took this very easily. If you end up losing this, you were robbed.



Unfortunately for you, I can't poll vote yet

Check out my battles if ya want...

W.Rite got dis one his shit seemed to flow alot better,he had better punches.NY jus came to weak. overall W.Rite...............



hit dis one up plz............


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