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i think carson took this one.... his opener and closer were stronger... i prefered his punches and all round construction of the verse... paddy, had some decent wordplay n punches,,, but think jus got beat...quite close tho......vote=carson
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aight...i think this was a pretty close battle....carson you came a little weaker than usual but not a bad verse...paddy your verse had a lot of good personals but your flow isn't exactly on point...carson your verse flowed smooth, decent punches and personals and overall you started and ended your verse better...vote goes to carson....paddy no hate your actually not bad at all man...keep elevating and fix your structure and you will have a lot more wins

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Close battle.

I liked Paddys verse... he had creative punches (creativity is a big thing with me) and some good wordplay.



^^good shit.

I don't think Carson had any punches that I really felt, with the exception of his closer which was better than Padds. Carson probably had a slightly better flow here, but both seemed a little choppy to me. I'll give this one to Paddy because of his creative punches.

Paddy had a good verse, and I think he definately edged the clever catagory as far as wordplay goes...

But the punches go to Carson.

Wordplay is cool and effective, if it turns into a punch that hurts.

Paddy's was funny, but not hurtful.
Soft.

Carson threw steady, gave a real good personal on the opener and was real inventive on the closer.

That's how ya start and finish a battle.

For a bit more experience shown, for the harder shots...

Carson (but this was pretty close, peeps)

Holla back...

Born vs. Ill

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