there's only room in the rap game 4 the truly best/
u cant be half way there-an it dont matta if u from da west/
da colour of yo skin means shit, its the words you thro/
your wordplay, vocab, and the way you flow/
could be black, doe in the bank an still u wack/
yo flows sound so like gangster1,yo skits r crap/
try to elevate nigga, an dont hate on me/
my doctor said i'm in a mental state-an i'm going crazy/
but i'ma stil gonna shine-coz its the survival of da fittest/
been reading some dope raps-written by the 'Definision of illness/
gangster1 i aint haiteng u, but i realised u da shittest/
Speek.Ez Edicius b burning u so much, you cant kick it/
all i need is a hamma an a nail, an already u turnt pale/
u eva seen this trickz bitch, mayne she so pale/
aint burnt u yet-bitch i've just warned up/
so happy that yo bitch linked me-i got my dick sucked/

you living a fantasy, thinking yo wack ass skits are dope/
bring u back to reality, u need help-how this bitch gonna cope/
you a big star in yo mummaz eyes, she loves an adores u/
but in the streets every1 knows u fake-an da bitches hate u/
tru niggaz see right through u-i see tha fear in ya soul/
u scared motha fucker-i leave yo pussy ass freezing in da cold/
my lyrics burn a hole-you get shook by just see-ing me/
dont have to bring my klik in this, it just u an me/- PUSSY
ha ha haah u crying?, why coz every1 taking shots at u/
wats the matta i fort u were gangster?, pussy1 dis name sootz u/
u trying to make dymez, but yo shit dont rhyme/
saying you bust crimes, but you at home all the time/ YEAH
you can take this how u wanna take this-i dont give a fuck/
can bring yo whole klik against me, but u wont tear me up/
dynasty soldiers lay back-an watch me fuck up XLG/
bitch, trick, lil shit, wack bitch take a pill u sleepy/

Erm.....where do I start?

Not the worsed diss I've seen but far from the best.
flow was fine and vocab was too but you need to be more creative in your punchlines, none of them really hit.
Do your homework next time you diss somebody.

Best part
ha ha haah u crying?, why coz every1 taking shots at u/
wats the matta i fort u were gangster?, pussy1 dis name sootz u/

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

yeah homie i know, thanks for tha honest feedback,

LFMAO!

Ok.

Punches were ok, nothing, special it flowed good..but there's no need to come hard in disses towards, xgxl some shit..

Keep it up & drop..more..


-Mario

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Fuck you

word home boy, uppin

not bad but the concept wasn't that gud.....
....I likes some of the vocab etc....flow aiight...
...all in all,aiight pice....6.5/10

word, uppin!

..this was okay..but next time you need to come little harder if you gonna diss..