ok 10 -20 lines
spit in 30 min.....
same rules

good luck

Your shit is wack and played- every verse a shocker-like you birth
if you recycled anymore, you would save the earth
This vet is just arogant , thinking hes god-given- this is reality check
You couldn't pull of a good punch, if your verses WEREN'T wack
All his wins , a simple cover-up- becaouse he only faces newbs
Its like hes claiming hes high, but he never acctualy smoked herbs (fake)
I wanted to take it easy, but he claims hes all that, so here's a hit
You think you verses are hot, but to the rest of us they never been lit
You say Reverse the Future and Advance the past -a hidden messige
becaouse I am the future your a past, and now your looking for a time passige (think about it )
You should leave this site, your in the past, like the dinosaurs- old news
Your trying to win this battle, is like trying to solve a murder case- with no clues
And while am exposing you , am gonna mention the convo in your sig, this is the end
just the beggining of one of you dirty convos - with a cross dressing -homosexual friend

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i wanna see wa he throwz up........
u threw up sum MADD nice shyt eki....good shyt*********
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yo eki....hit up mah battle.....n ill hit urz up afta token spitz....***************************************** ************************************************** *******

No posting links before both verses are up and without voting. -Token

Blah KeyD in 3 minutes..

Fucka this kid.. Couldn't flip concepts if his tongue was twisted
Wrapped him and put a bow on his head.. and he still aint gifted
I'll show you the spotlight.. At The Tunnels End
Thought you were moving the voters.. But it was just the wind
The only way you'll give me comp.. Is to buy me a dell
I'll put you in poverty.. And state your Fare Well (wellfare)
Might as well call you chucky.. Cuz sonning you is childs play
...Wrote in the woods.. and claim you write the wild way
You see.. It's impossible to be that wack and beat me
Hows it feel knowing I beat you..
.. Like scratching a sportscar.. this was Keyed in 3

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Uppin 1

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

aight

v/token

eki you came ok..but some of your verse didnt make sense to me..
a couple of lines didnt rhyme either

All his wins , a simple cover-up- becaouse he only faces newbs
Its like hes claiming hes high, but he never acctualy smoked herbs (fake)

^didnt rhyme..i even tried repeating it different ways to make it
if hurt your verse...
flow was there....and structure was good....but the punchlines didnt do it for me..
no hate man ..just being honest

Token....
good verse on your part..youv'e done better...but you still managed to have a few quotables...that i liked

I'll show you the spotlight.. At The Tunnels End
Thought you were moving the voters.. But it was just the wind

liked this one the ,ost for some reason...
flow was kinda blah....structure was there..
but you just out punched him...and came more witty...

no hate to either
not a bad read..but i know both can do better..
out...

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this was a pretty close battle
i gotta say the eki wins this by a hair
flow-eki
multi-tok
humor-tok
personlas-tie
structure-eki

tok you aint realy pu for the affort ive scene from you in the past

plz place an honest vote on my battle i spent the time on you return the favor a spend time on me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105423

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yo, Token got this one easily, like i say, The flow can maek or break a rhyme. Even if you had the illest rhyme in the world, a bad flow makes it sound like bad poetry...

Vote: Token

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PenPalz

Oh yea, i forgot, hit up this battle dawg,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105390

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PenPalz

Eki=u was aite bars were to stretched and some shit was stupid didn't really like some punches
token=some shit played i liked the gifted though it was funny as fuck and had me rollin son u got this no doubt nice punches and flow

vote=token