Return tha favor and hit this wit' an honest vote, or input on tha battle, at least uppin.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103166

Best line in tha battle: "with words, you rhymes stink like a guy, about to get curbed," -Rhyme


Punches- Dev -a lil' weak, but it was close

Flow- Rhyme -worked better for me, less choppy than Dev

Creativity- Rhyme -liked tha 'curb' line (Most people PROB'LY missed that one, Rhyme)

Multis- Neither

Opener- Dev -HAD a snap, even if not a hard hit. Rhyme didn't.

Closer- Dev -needs ALOTTA work, but again, you HAD a punch in closing, Rhyme didn't.

Enjoyment- Rhyme

Punches-Dev

Flow-Rhyme

Word Play-Neither

Overall- Wit categories, it's a tie, but Rhyme barely edged this one. I felt his shit a lil more.

Keep elevatin'..............................1

Dev Took This In Every Aspect. . His Punches Hit Harder, Rhyme Tyme. . Your Verse Was Played And Weak. . Atleast Try To Use Some Played Punches That Actually Hit Hard. . Vote - Dev.

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Fuck RhymeTyme, I done said this shit as a joke… got balls to bite
With your sorta skillz…. Can’t hold ya dick never mind a mic!
Ya try’na fight…. But like the blind who’s try’na write
Ya wanna start reading brail… cos like them ya aint in the light!
Ya in the shadows like a ghost… in fact have ya got one?
Whys that, ya ask?… cos if ya have send him back, where he’s got from!
Cos this 16 year old child from Kentucky... hes barely old enough to work
at 60ish posts should take it easy… ignore that, ya couldn’t get any worse!
I would rehearse ya dialect… try an add something worth while
Cos at the minute the ‘Tyme’ to ‘rhyme’ for you… is like the Mona-Lisa try’na smile!
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aight............................................. ........8/10 verse ratio...........
nice wordplay.......................................... ...
good ryme scene............................................. .....
decent and overall good punches and personals......................
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yo, yo

Dev, if that is really yo name,
I'm going to put your alias to lethal lyricist shame,
your rhymes, are wack, when you pull the back attack,
you get smacked, on crack, and then, you get jacked,
trying to pull a another one, when I'm not lookin,
after i post my rhyme we'll see what this motherfucker was cookin',
if he isnt slow, the rhyme may get you shooken,
cause i know you cant write, all those rhymes have been tooken,
dev, you're blind to my ability, you got no agility,
with words, you rhymes stink like a guy, about to get curbed,
but anyways, you need to go back to the burbs,
you need to be battlin all the noobies and herbs
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aight............................................. ..................7/10...........
nice metas............................................. ..........
ok punches........................................... ....................
overall decent verse...........................................
but lacked creativity........................................ ..........
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Vote/dev..............................aight peace.................................

dev won this one hands down, basically because his verse was good and not simple like rhymes shit, rt had the multi's but it wasnt enought, they didnt go good together, just sounded good
and since this is text the more complext verse wins

vote dev

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105465

Punches- Deva
Flow- Deva
Creativity- Deva
Multis- Deva
Opener- Deva
Closer- Deva
Enjoyment- Deva
Punches-Deva
Flow-Deva
Wurd Play-Deva
Overall-Deva

shit was better put ttogether nice lines an punhces
feelin his verse way more tehn other dudes
it aint time to rhyme for rhyme time.




http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?
s=&threadid=105427

^6can u hit this up ineed sum honest votes..
claim i bit but i didnt bite shit sumone bit from me
so vote honestly....shit will be delted wit
plz..i came wit sum hard shit u mite liek...pc..

final upp... lets get this shit finished..... holla and ill return the favour...honestly obviously....pZ.....

obvously deva had this shyt..yo deva if i could vote it would be 4 u................................................. .................................

This Was An OK Battle Pretty 1 Sided But Any Way Dev Took It With The Punches,Wordplay,Multie Etc...

Vote=Dev

Can Ya'll Vote On This??..IF SO THEN I WILL POLL VOTE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102778

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wack ass battle.. however dev outclassed rhyme tyme in nearly every category... rhyme tyme your verse was basically mostly filler you lacked any tight punchlines

dev sonned this dude with better dissed and punchlines

vote-dev

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