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MP~PHASIZ - Painted Faces
IP: CDD4 33E5
"Painted Faces"
[Verse 1] Escape to a world where everything is fiction Reality is held back, an unbreakable restriction No one is fo' real, it's all pretend for the senses Everyone's livin' a fantasy with all paid expenses Minds erode from doing what they've been told No way of getting things in order, it's uncontrolled They hold the reigns but choose to be untrue Been given the door but chose not to walk through Humans are nothing more than mechanical robots Control their movement and their train of thoughts Aint nobody playin' the part that they been given Lies and untruths has reality driven If only they could bring out what lies within Than the face would be more than another question [Chorus x2] No matter who you're dealing with No matter what race Everyone you meet, has a painted face [Verse 2] This is how the world juggles its flaws No movement of realness like it's on pause I find it hard even to believe myself The trust I once had has been layed on the shelf It's a situation that could crumble a foundation With no explanation or signs of transformation Tryin' to connect the links to an existance is hard When the sources to be joined have been permanently scared No way to tell what's right or what's wrong The guide lines to follow are long gone There's no way to see through the blindin' fog Minds are scrambled like on a runnin' jog Reapin' what's been sewed as time goes on While tryin' to figure out how this came upon [Chorus x2] No matter who you're dealing with No matter what race Everyone you meet, has a painted face [Verse 3] Now if it seems i'm judgemental it's because I am We were all made the same so who are you to condemn? I'm through interactin' with disguised souls I'm like a sport, just tryin' to achieve my goals And if the mind tells the body what to do Then why can't it just tell it to be true? I'm fed up with this shit and there needs to be a change I'm comin' after my target like at a gun range What happened to the honesty that was once present? It's now disappointment, a lesser extent Hook up a lie detector and watch us all fail There aint nobody on earth that would come to prevail To most the message bein' given won't be clear Have the wheel to their life but choose not to steer [Chorus x2] No matter who you're dealing with No matter what race Everyone you meet, has a painted face |
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IP: CDD4 33E5
Aight, i'll get my links up in a few...
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IP: C1DA C961
..Nice..good vocab..nice flow..just nice...
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IP: D464 A806
Been given the door but chose not to walk through
Humans are nothing more than mechanical robots -liked the imagery in this section conveyed it across nicely..- Everyone you meet, has a painted face -also liked this line..lol...so damn simple but maybe im reading between the lines with the metaphorical meaning..if i aint thats hella nice- I find it hard even to believe myself The trust I once had has been layed on the shelf -if worded better that line could have came across so nice.....but it was jus average..- reapin' what's been sewed as time goes on -again nice imagery...feel the rhyme scheme is feeling repetitive.. We were all made the same so who are you to condemn? -an intelligient line..- I'm like a sport, just tryin' to achieve my goals -heh a simple simile...nothing like 1 of those to get the peeps interested again...haa- Hook up a lie detector and watch us all fail -now be real its human nature to lie lol...- ok this wasnt much of a piece for quotables jus a couple of lines that stood as out as clever or deep..an still quite not sure bout what this is about...decent enough anyway tho..fel tthe abscence of multi's or something to lighten it up..felt very monotone when i was reading it..more like poetry til the last verse.. aight i no u peeped my other piece but i been told how battles get slept on in this site so can you please poll vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105580 thanks if you do...jus repaying your feedback on my drop anyway... ..oNe.. |
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