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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
ToddisMe 1 16.67%
TheProphet777 5 83.33%
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Old 01-10-04, 05:22 PM   #16
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Look man u facing a vet...U should have never replied/
Put him to death over and over ..which repeats how he dies/
^^^if u kill him over N over obviously his death is repetitive
Im keying nonsense against this fucking noob/
Stupid jew....Face the facts u got two loses cuz ur new/
^^just cuz u knew don't mean u gotta lose...No!
Im going easy on u...Im slaying u wit weak punches!/
Pack this bitch in...like the days my mom packed my lunches/
^^WTF??
Sentencing this bitch to death is the main idea i got/
Why yall ask? Because he typed up biten veres he forgot/
^^how can u type up somethin u forgot?...
Ill laugh at you even if you fucking try/
Joke him so bad about his weak personals...It will make him cry/
^^^no...no...no.....c'mon!!...
here ill make things easier Cuz this shit isnt my best/
I read your shit! Its weak as hell...U can never touch this/
Filler
Fuck a key of 14 lines....This is the end/
All i need is ONE Rhyme to bitch slap you my friend/
YOUR VERSE SUCKED!


No use in tryin to battle Todd.... Your rhymes is Wack
My brain is like the I Pod.... and you like an 8 track
Eww...NO!
As a matter a fact, I dont even put up a fight
It don't take no creativity to make it into your fuckin light
^^this is aight....should be worded better
Im 0-2, but still better than you
I do this shit on my own, you get ur shit from you wack ass crew
^^filler
So what is it, you can read the future
i dont need to be a prophet to tell that you is a loser
too simple
Oh shit im scared (not)here comes the dynasty soldiers to attack
I'll blow your ass up, like the U.S. did to IRAQ
Played as fuck...don't use those concepts again
And you the leader, i'll catch you like they did Sadaam
only difference is, when i catch you im gonna blow u up with a bomb
read my above statement
Ur lyrics is like weapons of mass destructions... i aint gonna lie
Before they even finish ya introduction, they already commited suicide
^^coulda been worded better.........

overall Todd came a lil better than Prophet....why??....Prophet's shit was mad simplistic, no complexity, no witty punches, even tho u think u better than him don't make your verse ill......and your mentality needs a boost, just cuz you're new don't mean you're wack...........both of y'all need to elevate....

vote Todd....for tryin to have punches at least....
 
Old 01-10-04, 05:32 PM   #17
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^^^hey newb stfu i beat ur ass on my other aka...Stfu herb...U dont know shit...............uppin 5th time..........................
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Old 01-10-04, 05:35 PM   #18
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ToddisMe - good structure, flow falls off a lil, basic vocab, some of the punches were ok, ok personals, no multis, basic wordplay

Prophet - good structure, flow was on target, good vocab, nice multis, pretty tight wordplay, punches hit pretty hard, nice personals

Conclusion - while no crew hate is the gayest rule ive ever heard of, prophet takes this in punches, wordplay, and personals, so he gets my vote

VOTE - PROPHET

since i took the time to read and leave my opinion id appreciate if u two did the same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...910#post1073910

much appreciated........
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Old 01-10-04, 06:04 PM   #19
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Originally posted by TheProphet777
^^^hey newb stfu i beat ur ass on my other aka...Stfu herb...U dont know shit...............uppin 5th time..........................


^^^u stupid asshole......whoever beat me on this site got dickrode the fuck out of it cuz none of you kids could beat me on a rapmusic, Lyrical war, 411 hype.... or any respected site on the net....you're wack admit it.....N you'll keep gettin dickrode on this site cuz these newbs wanna get rode too........lmao...you're a dumbass....
 
Old 01-10-04, 06:07 PM   #20
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N what was your other A.K anyway??..........................it's obvious you won't say....cuz you know i beat your ass N you got rode ... herb ass..............u kids are funny i swear...
 
Old 01-10-04, 06:17 PM   #21
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good battle.....but prophet wins easily....
his wordplay was better, and appealed to me more...
his punches hit harder....even tho todd attempted some punches...ya shit was too basic.....elevate.....
so....
prophet - vote
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Old 01-10-04, 06:18 PM   #22
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Ok well ...Todd you got a little to caugh up in the weapons war thing and i didn't really like that shit...if you wanna fun of him you gotta come with harder shit then....i'll blow you up with a bomb??? well thats not creative at all...bombs blow up its what they do..anyone can do it so to say that....is just moronic....anyway...Prophet got this..i didn't really like either verse but the fact that prophet had 1 1/2 good lines was enough to take this.............................................. peace
 
 


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