Made this one this morning in bed after i woke up, haha tell me what ya think
peace

Let me tell you all story of mine // 18 years down the line // back in '85 was the time //
an innocent lil boy // all pure in heart // filled his mother with joy // for creating this art // but as the days past // this kid grew more older // stopped attending mass // and grew more colder // his mine set changed // due to things he saw // views all
rearranged // started breaking the law // got in trouble with authority // parents asked what they did wrong // rap was his main priority // it helped him stay strong // elders told him what to do // he did not accept it // none of them had a clue // he's not what they expected // hes now almost a man // and wants to change the world // started drawing out a plan // and became unfurled // its takes man to know // whats right and whats
wrong // this kid's ready to show // everyone join along

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Heres my lifline

There once was a boy who lived in Portland//
He had a good life until his parents got a divorcement//
He set off to find a good life//
But he got punched around and got stabbed with a knife//
When he grew older he joined a gang//
He rapped,but people through stuff at him whenever he sang//
He never liked his life,so he might commit suicide//
He needed love from a family but no one could provid it//
But now he has a good life living in Boston//
His parents regret their divorce...but now it will cost them.
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thx, its just a rough copy, i might expand it and make a full song called Lifeline and talk about what influenced me to start writting, peace

U like mine???

shit my lifeline will be used when i expire my tyme/
i only reason for me to live is to muder cats through rhyme/

ive done wat mansons done wit out a fraction of the consueqnce/
and if any cat thinks they can lyrically serve me, they talkin non sense/
theyll get smacked upside they head and lose conscience/

my flows are tight like the weaves of a rope/
the day i die will be the day i choke/
but i rule this lyrical chapter of life/
puttin peoples "life-on-the-line" on this site/
and alot of the things i due aint right/

id rather be rich wit a house in the burbs/
cats give me advice and tell me im good wit the words/
record is 3-2 meanin more cats got served/

but this aint a chinese food place/
id rather have my face erased from this waste/
i may bless the mic, but im really just a humand disgrace/
ill use my lifeline when theres nothin left at stake/

my lifeline.............. word up

lets keep it going

get it cats served but its not a chinese place

lol laughin my ass of

Nice..............................dat was good.............u like mine?????????????

yup but it was still only a lil above average

my lifeline goes alil summtin like dis

my lifeline is to write rhymes/ murder any mutherfucka wit tight
rhymes/ dont fuck wit wise guys/ never sniffing white lines/ just fucked up on sprite, guys/ and in tight lies/ i give my lifeline/ to my guys/ cuz no need for life guys/ i will strike my/ self wit a tite lie/ aiming to my right side/ shooting myself in a driveby/ or jumping off a high-rise/ and when i die guys... ima arise'n my/ funeral and scream surprise guys

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