vote - As

took this easily, better punches and better wordplay overall...his verse was better worded, but his structure is the only thing lacking...fixed that up..

1ne.

vote on this battle in return...

Cannabarz vs Dan

don't forget to poll...one.

aight then im out for he nite, one,.............................................. .................................................. ..................................................

Aigh sic ama add 4 lines to my original verse

here it goes:

0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/

I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/
Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/sickwitmusic.htm (his Audio site...sounds weak as fucc..lol

(added 4 lines)

I'm wreckin ya hate, no need for argument Sic called this debate/
I run time without freight! like bombers with no wings, you never gonig to elevate!/

Can't feel me? Aes just left the debris, you should of said no to the callout cause my punches only getting worse!//
Truth be told yo avy is way better than your whole verse!!!/..lol


done deal.............

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ayo dont need to break it down Aesthetic got this he had hardher hitting punches and had better flow and good structure...................
my vote-Aesthetic
hit up my battle and return the favor......................thanx..............~*1* ~

shit heres the link sorry bout that................thanx.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109269

Punches: Neither
Multis: As
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: As
Opener: As
Closer: As

Both of you need punches and wordplay, i don't thikn I saw one in there. As had a more polished verse, hot multis. Sick's verse was all around weak.

Vote - Aesthetic

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/
Best bar of the battle

Could you return the favor, in my signature

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0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/
Nice Punch..Funny

You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/
Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/
..The Weaker Of The 3 Bars

I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/
Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!....
The Best Of Your Lines....Original



As Wins By Far....Punches Hit..But You're Structure Needs Working On....Even Though I Battle Like That..People Say Bars Are Too Long... ..I Like It Though...

Good Battle. Vote = As

ightt Aesthetic came good but could have been beter..........
flow:Aesthetic
wordplay:nethier
structure:Aesthetic
punches:Aesthetic
over all my vote gos to Aesthetic
</ Aesthetic

oh shit 4 got to pole vote..........and hit this up and return the favor.thanx....*1*...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109825

Thnx all ya'll 1 more and this will be closed

uppun............................................. .

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