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A Little Somtin
IP: 1C15 88FF
I WROTE THIS TO THE FAB - KEEPIN IT GANGSTA INSTRUMENTAL
WANNA GET RUFF BUDDY THEN GET RUFF BUDDY GET DUMMY CUZ I GET DUMMY/ WHEN THA FUSE RUN OUT AND THA CANNON DROP THAT MEANS ITS TIME TO GET RUNNY/ DRESS BUMMY PANTS SAG SONNY SICWIT STUNNIN BITCHES TILL THEY GET CUMMY/ KEEPIN IT GANGSTA TILL IT GETS SUNNY WHEN THA MOON SETS ITS TIME TO GET STUMBLY/ SHES LIKE A BAG OF CHIPS IM NOT STOPPIN TILL SHE GETS CRUMMY/ TO GET PERSONAL ON THESE CATS I DROP ARSONALS ON THESE CATS/ MY VERSES EXPLODE ON THESE ASSHOLES POP SHIT TILL THEY MOUTHS CLOSE/ GET IN A CYPHER AND DROP BLOWS IF THEY WANNA GET SILLY THEN I DROP BOWS/ BITCHES ACT REAL THEN I DROP HOS YALL HEARD ABOUT SICWIT POPPIN THAT SHIT/ YALL WANNA STOP HIM THEN BE THA NEXT IN LINE TO HOP ON HIS DICK/ IM AUTHENTIC THA REAL OF THE REAL I MAKE THESE KIDS CLAM UP/ I COMPRESS THESE BIG MOUTH BITCHES STUFF THEM WITH DICK THEN DISS THEY KISSES/ MY SPITS COME OUT WITH WORLDWIND FORCE YOURS COME OUT WITH A GUST/ I PEIRCE PEOPLES EGO'S SEND EM HOME NOT ABLE TO TRUST NOBODY/ I DONT STOP POUNDIN TILL THEY FACES GET BLOODY N THEY CUTS GET GUSHY/ |
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IP: C1DA C961
CAPS are hurting my eyes...
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IP: DD10 0DFF
This was ok....but like Penskills said dont use caps...your structure needs some work though,...try to shorten your lines up so its not so stretched out cause it takes away from the flow in your piece....but overall this was ok...keep at it.
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