intro: yeah, oi pussy-ha ha,

aint nobody like you on this site-i cracked up at yo photo
you spit some decent rhymes-but yo picture is loko
that yankee cap dont sute ya-and u aint in the hood
you go to harvet you pussy-and yo life is good
u spit rhymes like u led the hard life-shut tha fuck up u trick
ima the only nigga on here that see's straight thru yo skit
if u ever saw a mil, you'll probably run 4 yo life
u soft hearted-u fucking scared of your wife
claiming you in brooklyn and you got doggz with rage
yo lyrics are vintage-its like u dieing of old age
i'll hit any nigga dat beefs-coz i love to beef yo,
but pricks like u just love to lik pussy yo
penskills said he fed up of all these web thugs
ha ha-he was right-coz pussy you aint felt no real sluuugz
the closest u been 2 a piece-is playing vice city
so G-Shyne take it like a man-coz u nothing but pussy

I'M SORRY, I'M SORRY I JUST WANTED " HATE AN RIDE YO DICK...


watever colour u are u best watch yo back
i aint gonna kill ya-ima just expose some facts
that face u putting on, is making u look gayer than ever
i should open yo mouth and shove down u a loaded beretta
cock back tha trigger an watch yo leg bones shiver
while yo eyes bloodshot, and yo heart fucking splatters
shatters, you dead yo blood all over the place
if the beef comes-ima move at the slowest pace
clowns like u wish u were down in the getto
should post a picture of you-when you were down in netto
you can neva shine-coz nobody feels yo skits
they wack,u get lame reply's coz they feel sorry 4u-bitch
keep yo colour-be proud-an stop trying be a nigga
u could neva immatate-coz yo courage is smaller
who's yo idol? (its loon) thats why u crap
stay at the bottom of the league bitch, coz u so fucking wack!

yeah

your lyrics were good but the way youve strucktured it dosent flow well and its not easy to read.

give an honest vote on my battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&page=2&pp=15

Good flow here,some nice punches and meta's,structure was ok,would be a good audio i think,descent drop man.

Peace