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Old 01-13-04, 11:07 PM   #1
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Opened Eye's of a Phsyco

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The worlds gettin smaller, I got problems ta solve,
And as they get taller, I watch the whole world evolve,
Everythings spinnin, Im worse off now then in the beginnin,
I shouldnt be sinnin, But Im overrun wit my ideas of winnin,
But now that I've got opened eyes I realize Itd be wize
Too devise a plan that would leave even hitler surprised,
This world is mine, I only have to get a grasp,
Then its just fine, let endless time go fast,
Before was my past and now's here at last,
Do things my way and leave economy inna cast,
Dead people in the ocean is my favourite,
Remember the moment and then I savour it,
Its like being inside a never ending dream,
If only I could prove how ugly things can seem,
Understand always havin a lonely day,
In the eye of a maniac is the only way,

I aint pshyco or nothin, just gettin deep into it.
Pz.
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Old 01-14-04, 01:07 AM   #2
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nah nigga you aint just gettin in2 it You R psychotic dominant, sike I'm jokin dog! It did kinna make you sound crazy abit wit the reference 2 how hitler'd B surprized. Amazingly written piece I give props. Hey it aint nothing wrong with being crazy, i was in the ward but I wrote myself out Theres been alot of teen thats gone down that road 2 putting themselves in the system and cannot emulate recovery. As long as you can keep your insanity chained, contained and under wrapps your straight, but I'll let u in on abit of what I kno, SEVERELY insane ppl are more visually based and more in touch with their emotions due to their mental symptoms than sane individuals livin lives of normalcy. Its a shame that these hospitalized subjects cannot recover because they'd make a enormous difference in ethics, euthenics hence the quality of our environments. Nah I don't think ur crazy I'm playin. Tight flow, 4real even do da poem did sound like you lost it. I enjoyed 2 much.
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Old 01-14-04, 09:10 AM   #3
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Shit bro insane people are deep, thanks for the feedback.
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Old 01-17-04, 05:44 AM   #4
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this was alrite its wasn't what i expected
its highlite was ya flow without doubt, illness
i actually like ya title, it fits the overall theme
this wasn't bad at all man. straight poem
hollar back when ya get the chance !!
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