10-16 lines
blind spit
due tomorrow to accomodate both of our needs
good luck

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iight...

seein as im very busy...

ive just keyed this up now...

you can have until tomorrow if you need it...

really you shouldnt need it dawg...

checkin in....

droppin in a few......................................

listen...

the 'para''meters' that are used to measure your verse in dopeness are miniscule
everytime you drop a verse, the feedback is always ridicule
your avvy is a portrait of you, lookin like a aid infested animal from the moon
you should have elevated, in my opinion you challenged us too soon
a cant decide if your human, or just an intelligent ape
you're so fucked up, you even like it when ur girl gets raped
your rhymes are so wack, you need to explain every-line
even tho you win some, it still seems like you lose every-time
your by far the shittest, out of the d/r crew 'paragone'
your out of breathe while im still runnin the marathon
your too much like Michael Jackson, think your a thriller
how can that be true, when all of your verse is just filler
see, now ive 'cum' much harder, busted a nut on ur girls face
its really amazing to see, how easily ive won this race

if you dont understand it... dont vote... vote correctly or it'll be taken off neway...

good luck Meters...

im out now man... have fun...

laterz

uppin for your verse man...

hurry it up... ive posted mine this mornin... u still aint done it...

come on... plz... ty...

laterz

dam....good verse......n good battle wit me....lol.....yo man u culd hit up mah battle....
thnx dawg.........
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Meters... jus uppin this so ya can find it easier dawg...

good luck once again...

Killer... dont freepost please............................................ ........

thank you...

OUT

^ thanks

What's lacking from your verse?, I guess that substance is a good place to start,
Bitch is trying to step to me? like John Ritter you should of had a change of heart!,
You're saying that ya tight!? Now this bitch is streching the truth like his shit lines,
But It'll be appropriate when ya taken in a strecher after ya jaw's been misaligned!,
Freeman's new here? i'll show you the ropes and make sure ya get the hang of it,
Got a good record, but like a stoner you try to match herbs and always take hits!,
Freeman's trapped in obscurity and wackness, slave to a pretty destructive cycle,
I've read ya wack battles and like Green Earth i ENCOURAGE this faggot to recycle!,
So free ya ain't familiar with bars, even with the quantity of booze(boo) you're getting,
I'm the bartender the way i have you served and ya vomiting, oh excuse me, spitting,
Is that you being gagged in your avy? yeah, seems this bitch is really fucking free,
Tryin to make'a name for yaself ridin the big dogs, stay true to your nature and flea!,
It seems i've destroyed you utterly, sorry to bust your balls but that's it a nut-shell,
Finished you with wordplay, left ya with your ears ringing like Alexander Graham Bell

Alexander Graham Bell invented the telephone

If you don't understand both verses well, don't vote

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wen i read freemanz...i waz like "dammmm" but wen i read meterz' i waz like
"dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm"
meterz takes dis 4 bett punches n flow
freeman....good shyt but i felt meterz' shyt more.......
propz 2 both tho
punches: meterz:
flow: m
structure: m
humour: free
personalz: tie
vote: meterz
yo hit mah battle up wit Dr. punch n mah oda one wit micheal madness....ill drop link.....

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yo this is how i saw it...so blah..............................
freeman has a solid sructure.......well at least for the last part...first part fucked up...
and second meters has a No structure.....to long of a verse............and.......
no1 wants to read a long ass verse....keep the shit too 10 lines only for fucks sake...
aight well do to my own personals conclusion freeman got this.....because....
his verse was more of a battle verse......which made his wordplat really stand out...
ok.........vote/freeman......................peace................ ....

Our verses were the same length you idiot...hahaha ^

Just my structure was one line longer...also more even...your vote shouldn't count for stupidity.

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yo hit up mah battle...................?!?!?!?!?!?!????????

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Blah, upping for real votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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