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IP: 4577 CD9A
dope homos..where are you?
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: 399E F0FD
I liked that piece... I come back for a visit and stop in to view an O.M. and happen to see someone mention me. That's pretty dope. It was good how you brought all the Legend's pieces in to make your verse. I respect the respect you've give to anyone in the Legends forum. Too bad I'm not a mod of the Legend's Forum or O.M. anymore. Aw well I deserve it for being gone for so long. Keep it up Sarcasm. I enjoyed this piece
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Thank very very much for checking out this piece Domain..
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: CCBC 2938
"message it was sending, the concepts portrayed at the ending,
Though, my feelings on Weezy's "America" is still pending," ^liked this bar alot,flowed well and used nice vocab. As a whole the peice was a original idea,usin past legends to get there urself,wordplay was there in bits,flow was pretty good but as the others have said limit the fillers,i had the same problem tryna squeeze to much in.imagery was good aswell,vocab good too,internals so good drop man. P.S Hit mine if u can dawg. Peace Last edited by west : 01-15-04 at 12:51 PM. |
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Well...Very nice piece, Lots of internals and all of that. Like said before, many filler words were thrown in.. Kinda fucked up the flow. But this was very very dope, You had a nice flow whenever you kept it strong and I like how you finally gave respect to the pieces posted in Legends. Very nice..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
..thank u..all..
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
People we can depend on..friends..
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Dopology..is my word...
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yo..hello..isquiero
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I wonder..when will the upping stop?
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
hey deac where u at?
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
hahhaha.....you really do want to be in legends......Legends is nothing but dr'n because your a popular bastid.....anyways decent flow i enjoyed...ive seen better in you but this hit the lucky medium...congrats
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IP: 4577 CD9A
lol..dope!..lucky medium...
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Soft Focus Suicide Inc. RhymeVantage Def.Ill Ghost-Writers Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..
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^ Says It All ^
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IP: 1422 1EBC
I've Never Actually Read Any Of Your Stuff, And To Be Honest, I Was Quite Impressed. Your Internals Were Nice And Flow Was Good In Most Areas. The Legends Idea Didnt Really Appeal To Me At First, But I Liked What You Produced Out Of It. A Nice Drop, I'll Be Checking Out More Of Your Stuff When You Drop Them.
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IP: 7E31 A542
This Showed The Enjoyment You Have on This Site...
I Really Like How You Complemented The Peeps You Like On Here...My Big Inspiration is Emerge Too Me His art is Absolutely Phenomenal... 7/10
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