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Unfinished...
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I remember the days
back when i was younger Living in an innocent way before i felt the hunger It has been slowly pullin me under My soul cries for freedom While it is broken and torn asunder The darkness will encompass my being As I futiley beg for repentence For my mind refuses to suffer my spirit the penance Too consumed with pursuit of the pleasures of flesh I only have committment to my self Place my contentmet above all else For i've tasted the venom and grown accustomed to the sting The sins of iniquiety and sex will never end I am overcome with evil and overrun by demons My exorcism is long overdue The angels in my presence flutter away To leave my spirit dismal and my life in a fray It seems at least in the sublminal some power's tryna say You are an outcast, depart from me this day... unfinished
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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this is more spoken word than anythign else...i need to get some elevated pieces on here
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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