Im so tired of sein this battle get sat on day after fuckin day, sorry for all the posts mods

Illamintid

"2) This cat MADE his first MISTAKE ~ tryin to battle against ME/
this blind SNAKE is chopped STEAK ~ his DESTINY’s to lose to me//"

^^^Not a bad punch right their. Could have came a lil bit harder but not bad.....

"4) You was brain-DEAD before I IMBEDDED your spine into your SKULL/
I shoved your nose BONE up your forehead ~ shattered your CRYSTAL//"

^^^Also one of your more stronger punchs. Nice internal rhyme...flow was their and it rhymed well....nice punch


Michael Madness

"Moral of the rhyme being, this Bitch could never b hard /
u call me brain less, well if I am , U mustve been born a retard /
But Ima stay spittin till the best in me is gone /
u said destiny will bring u to win , More like destiny will prove u wrong /"

^^^I liked those too punchs right their. They both hit hard and had nice creativity.

"The site of your text makes me want to Sick n want to hearl /
Fact is...I've seen harder punches thrown from a six yr old girl /
Youv'e mixed w/ the most maddest in the world,
So peeps, I must merk him
Then he'll be off of R-B fer 10 Days , Cryin 1 day for each line that hurt him//"

^^^them punchs right their were easily some pre-school raps right their kid. Reading this i felt that you could have been alot more creative and more witty but w/e....

THE FINALE OUTCOME

Illmintid----->>>> You had a pretty straiight verse. You had some nice punchs...good flow and nice creativiy

Michael M----->>> You also had some nice punchs, nice flow. Only down fall would be that you werent so creative in your punchs.

VOTE---- ILLMINTID

Be easy you two....1

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Igght lets get some Votes uppin this Biatch./..........................

ILL- You showed some sign of begining skill. You had the right idea your punches were just weak an that mike jackson shits played to death on this kid. An some shit just wasent maken alot of sense to me. Be more clever in your shit.

Mike- Desent drop you feeded on his shit but no rule against it so I like the first line
Your punches could also use some work. Be more creative you got the right idea it just comes with practice.

OVERALL-Mike for harder punches
Hit these battles up with votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
thanks

Been upped way to many times , just get this over w/ nd vote

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112155 -vs- Ghetto Mike

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cHaLkEd uP: 2
DeMoLiShEd bY: 0
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// + tKo's + \\: 1

illamintid took this battle i think..his punches were on point...nice wordplay in this battle...MM shoulda put much more effort into this battle...

v-illamintid

return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...320#post1096320

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Feedback/Poll votes would be appreciated:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112155 -vs- Ghetto Mike

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cHaLkEd uP: 2
DeMoLiShEd bY: 0
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Feedback/Poll votes would be appreciated:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112155 -vs- Ghetto Mike

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106567 -vs- Lokeye



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cHaLkEd uP: 2
DeMoLiShEd bY: 0
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come on this shit is mad old , lets get this voted on and over with finally , mods sorry bout all the posts but this battle is almost a week old, Lets get these votes up............

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Feedback/Poll votes would be appreciated:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112155 -vs- Ghetto Mike

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106567 -vs- Lokeye



// + rEcoRd + \\
cHaLkEd uP: 2
DeMoLiShEd bY: 0
// + kO's + \\: 1
// + tKo's + \\: 1

ightt i dont eevn need to break this down MM came better witht he punches and had a better sttructure nice battel tho....
my vote-HH