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Old 01-17-04, 10:04 AM   #1
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roux vs AJ

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Practice for me, might lose, but hey I need the practice.

10 Lines
No crew, hate, d/r votes.
No feeding.
No biting.
Etc...
Your spit first.

Good luck to ya man.
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Old 01-17-04, 10:14 AM   #2
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all right, it's been a while, here goes....



take this challenge like it's your lunch money//
you wanna battle the roux now that's funny
i handle mine, it's a must you handle yours//
send you home with diaper rash in pampers and damaged drawers
my vocab is like double d titties, in need of reduction//
my spit so fat it's a candidate for lyposuction, punch you with it and you cease to function
you's a sissy but ya claim to be "straight"//
but i know for a fact last night a mexican queen touched your prostate
that's all, that's it, so hurry up and get back to me//
you just got worked like a Korean boy in a Nike factory
 
Old 01-17-04, 10:16 AM   #3
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Alright man, I will drop in a minute, nice drop.
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Old 01-17-04, 10:31 AM   #4
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O my god, R U serious, X marks the spot of illiteracy
Ya sig looks like an article from 3rd World Conspiricy
Observe these lyrics in the void that stares back...
Try to read ya sig kid, bet ya have a heart attack
He's just a nothing and will never be anything more
Ya mom's got a step up, she the main street whore
This kid could spit with bitten rhymes and still lose
He should bite from Av so the bit lyrics could be x2
He is still useing // no wonder you got 9 losses...
He thinks about this in his sleep he turns and tosses

Like I said I am just getting started, don't expeect much.
Votes are very much welcome, and if you don't understand
the punchse he and I threw then please don't vote.
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Old 01-17-04, 10:43 AM   #5
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Easy match to judge, newer people should learn how much a clean structure helps the flow and message of your verse. For this reason and also because of personals, better punches, and an overall better verse my vote goes to AJ. My only advice would be to come harder at certain points, like when you started talking about 'the void' it was a little poetry-ish. However, liked the punch that came after that set-up. Nice job guys, drop a vote if you have the time

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107574
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Old 01-17-04, 10:49 AM   #6
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werd aj gets this his punches were much more consistent,
with a nice structure and better flow,
roux you gotta structure ur verse differently man....look at aj'salos harder punches man,
plz return the favor http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107574 thx...............pz
 
Old 01-17-04, 10:54 AM   #7
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Already voted on ya battle with Meters K, I just dropped a link over there, kind of funny if you think about it.

1st Uppin For Some Votes...
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Old 01-17-04, 01:00 PM   #8
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Come on people lets get some votes in here, don't sleep on this.

2nd Uppin for some votes.

Drop your links and your battles will be vote on by us. Thanks...
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Old 01-17-04, 01:41 PM   #9
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Come on people, are K and Meters the only ones that are going to vote, don't be so selfish, vote on my battle and I will vote on yours, easy as that.

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Old 01-17-04, 01:46 PM   #10
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i'd vote AJ if i could. Better flow. Liked the sig hit. Roux had some good hits too, but I give edge to a flow.
 
Old 01-17-04, 02:18 PM   #11
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i think this was 1 sided battle. AJ straight killed this shit. roux, you came weak as fuck to me, u need to put better punches and personals. aj you took this cuz of flow, punches, and structure. i liked your verse, you good, try out for complex, link in my sig aihgT?

PUnches= aj
personals- aj
flow- aj
wordplay= aj

vote= aj, good battle, props to both, but roux, elevate

hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106323
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Old 01-17-04, 02:45 PM   #12
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very easy one to pick here....
AJ win this hands down.....better structure-punches-personals-wordplay-and meti4's....
I never heard of AJ before....maybe its a name switch.....but u are pretty good..
The other cat didnt stand a chance.....he was a tru newbie...wit style and delivery..

vote-AJ
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Old 01-17-04, 02:51 PM   #13
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^..Basically that.
AJ, basically no newbie.. or he's doing a good job not to look like one..
Better punches..structure everything.. just not herbish..
Nothing great.. & momma lines are a no - no..
But you still take this with a tremendous difference. merkjob..

vote AJ
 
 


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