Boxin a Beat, Like I was Mohammed Ali,
Look like a butterfly, sting like a bee,
The only femcee to set your mind free,
Lyrical genius? or barking up the wrong tree?
Maniac to take your thoughts back to a time
when rappers had to be male, mysogynists and all black
didn't matter about rhyme, all the patter was about race
Resolved only when eminem showed his ugly white face
Not a trace of equality in the whole hip hop industry
Wonder why the statistics show..females addicted to Hennessy
Crack and cocaine, ignite in their brains like a nigga dropped a match
That shed light on the rap game, that brought us all shame,
When Tupac died at the hand of a bullet, a moment of silence,
Then we returned full of it, bragging about money, gold and lawsuits
But do any of the mainstream rappers spare a thought for their roots?
Mothers are dissed, uncles are missed, tradgedy and then heartache,
Results in a long list of endless insults, addictions and pow..lice
Fans on the in..crease, but our dignity had de..creased, we been fleeced
Like a pimp raping his hoes we got shit coming out of our nose
Our past life is exposed, leaving a nigga about to explode
He just hold up and relode, empties clips at all of his homies
Now you know me, you see how much structure and flow mean...

this was a clean ryhme u are the best female mc ive heard so far

Best female MC? dayumm! are you serious? thanks..wow, now thats a compliment and a half! but not sure i'm deserving...am i the only female mc you have heard so far? you are new after all!

I think the term currently in use is 'uppin'

LMAO theres me babbling random nonsense again....

yo, that shit was serious! if only i knew a female rapper like u. Peave & Lov, oh yea we should do a song together.

Yeah this was a good piece....enjoyed the read....you had pretty good structure in this, just a few lines could be shortened a bit but it was still good i thought....you had some good flow in there, stayed on point.....had some good vocab....overall this was a good piece i thought....keep at it.

..Not just a best female MC...you are just plain good Mc...

wow, thanks...

shit....that ryme was ill....but wots wrong wit eminem