yo 10-15 lines,

dont matter who spits first..i prolly will first so lets get this down with in the hour...

His fame is pure fiction girls claim you're ugly and it's shitty too
Cuz if beauty's skin deep, the surface of ur body's a kiddie pool
what a fool,Stay convinced that this writer,will spray you with ammo
punch u twice in the chest, youve now the ribcage of a camel
Scripts slay any mammal, fillet your phrase into shammbles
Im a Jurassic Shark deep w/ flow, you just play w/ the tadpoles
what zar knows,As the sound of defeat,meanwhile you pause to cover your rep
Yeah, you’re Original, Bitch…I’ve never seen a Stutter in text
like damn, have the mic so far up your ass- fuck a hypeman
next time we're head to head, ya spine'll be a mic stand

while you waitin think you could vote here please?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107269

check in i will spit l8a as im a skool............................................

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Mc aines picks up the mic
Zarbons lyrics are like world trade,strong untill it faced a big task(planes)/
Go visit the W.e.c cos ur lyrics are played and not in MY class/

Its nothin to stop what little skill u got, no need to slander/
I'll take u out with the one-two punch like lennox did evander/

My flow is dope you cant survive,so dont even try/
Ive bin told i gott skillz that even dolla billz cant buy/

With my computer laggin,it still cant stall me/
Cos ur bout to get shot at more times then a motha fuckin goalie/

Your lyrics are small like your brain,they have little wordplay the puches dont hit/
i'll give you lyrics bigger than any of your spit i've got lyrics so big that dat they dont even fit this shit/

People are tellin me to elevate ma shit but i dont care/
Im happy as i am,cos wen i elevate my battles wont b fair/

Im reppin the dynasty soldiers this rap shits new dopest crew/
In this battle im thinkin 'im a soldier imma go tear through you'/

Im done in this shit next time dont battle me just pass/
Imma now put this mic down so i can cum kick YOUR ass/

uppin 4 votes

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uppin 4 votes #1..............................................

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testin the 50 char rule

Opener:Zarbon
Closer:Mc Aines
Flow:Mc Aines
Punches:Mc Aines
Enjoyment:Mc Aines
VOTE: Mc Aines

Best Line:: I'll take u out with the one-two punch like lennox did evander/

aight ill say a lil bit more so it dnt get void!
Zarbon good verse but wasnt strong enuf 2 contend!
Mc Aines gr8 verse but u let urself down with ur Opener it was wack!(u can do beta!!)

erm ,y uo fucking newbies. lmao.
zarbon took this, pretty easily.

v/ zarbon.

mc aines: you used too much played material, thats not interesting to me anymore. such as: world trade center lines, boxing lines... more... i think you get the picture...you needa vote on more battles & see whats played & whats not..

zarbon: nice verse overalll. .. i think u half assed it..maybe ur a vet under an alias or maybe ur from another site...cuz FL kids are never this good to start with... good punches, i liked the kiddie pool opener. nice stuff...

both of you vote here, NOW.:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...486#post1104486

Opener-zar, cause his opener was just iller
closer-zar, closer was iller too
Flow/Feadability-zar, because mc had some really stretched lines that through the flow off
Originality-zar

Mc was cool, but not very consistant...
The stretched linens kept throwing me off and none of his punches relly hit as hard as zars opener and closer exept the goalie line, so zar gets it for the above reasons...

v/zar

Please drop a vote in one of the battles in my sig...

-W1

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