10 lines 30 mins...
Blind sopits.. we both drop at the same time..
Good luck..

^ Blind spits I meant...

Checkin' In...........

checkin in..........................................

This herbs a fellow Welshman... the kind that makes us look weak
'Cos before you reach ten posts son... ya reaching one defeat
Ya structure needs building on.. < 'Constructive critisism' incurred
Facing me? It ain't the scope... ya whole vision must be blurred!
You're a standard newbie kid.. one glance at ya verse 'n it shows
For every poll you obtain... the voting emcee's nose grows!
Lyrical Sniper... *Ahem*... probably the most original handle yet
You've got it three times in your drops.. still... its easy to forget
I say "Nobody can beat me"... this loser's like.. "Yeah, I can!"
^ Work it out.. I caned your drop before your typin' had began!

you call your self harlens finest "but you come from a small town in wales"
your just like peter pan thinkin you can beat me "grow up your telling tales"

This is a lyrical war " and i'm the dream master in command"
again your like peter pan with your lyrics you can "Never Never Land"

you suck man liturally, fuck harlems finest, "change your name to Dyson"
and you copy and paste others rhymes and flows "and bite off others like mike tyson"

i'm evil nigga "i rip shit and take rappers souls"
luck for you, you aint in an election "coz you aint gettin NO votes in the polls"

your birthdays on christmas eve " ill remeber to send you a card"
but i'd rather send you a christmas present" leave your bones shatterd and scared"


ok uppin for votes....

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

LM are you serious?..
Peter pan lines?
Tyson lines..played as fuck.
& personals? There was only one true personal..
and it belongs to Harlem & the whole Wales thing.
..Also Sniper dont bold parts of your verse & seperate ur bars.
Also work on creativity...& be more complex.
..Harlem also had more direct hitting punches, hence the handle line.
Not a very good battle, but Harlem takes this..more creativity.
(& LM you know better then to vote like that..

uppin............................................. .......

haha he voted for the sniper kid?lmao kid clearly lost..whats sup with all the peter pan lines? extreme gayness..and a tyson line?thats not only played..its dead...what a pointless battle..

v/harlemsfinest aka aftermath

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Uppin x2......
Don't forget to poll the votes, drop a link etc...

Uppin . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Harlem had nice complexity, and consistant with punches, throughout...
I liked snipers secong peter pan line, but his verse was flat besided that...
Harlem cont it with pur consistantsy, and how he put his words together...

Plese return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107595&page=1

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v/harlem, if you didnt get that from the explination...

-W1

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uppin.............................................