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Opposite ends of the Spectrum
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this is an audio verse that i have but here's the lyrics...
I'm the cause of destruction and the creation of life but they balance each other out w/ the lyrics that i write offerin you further insight to look deep past the light cuz it always keeps you blinded, try as hard as you might the harder the fight, the harder that your going to fall your lucky anyone was there to yell out timber at all in a place like this where you're surrounded w/darkness it's hard for anyone to embark its.... so cold outside and the weather remains ever-changing like the patterns of your life when there steady re-arranging and it seems so strange now that all the colors dissipated now your growin agitated cuz it's not what you anticipated so your trying to change back to a more familiar mode but your feelings are so built up your about to explode about to corrode, your mind is travelling down the wrong road now your detached from yourself like 3rd person point of view steady confused no matter which route you decide to choose i replied to Mirrors, Repetitive Occurences and Dev's Untitled
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IP: E8A9 7A28
yo nice shit bro, basic, deep and simple, flow was tight but proply coulda used a lil more vocab but your wordplay and multi's made up for that and I really like the closing line really finished the piece off nicely. only thing I do really wish for though was this to maybe be longer and maybe a hook added but dope shit bro keep droppin.
peep my collab with Yaz called "Stories of Old" and leave some feedback, muchly appreciated and thanx in advance. peace.
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