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Old 01-19-04, 02:46 PM   #1
Diverse
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this is an audio verse that i have but here's the lyrics...

I'm the cause of destruction and the creation of life
but they balance each other out w/ the lyrics that i write
offerin you further insight to look deep past the light
cuz it always keeps you blinded, try as hard as you might
the harder the fight, the harder that your going to fall
your lucky anyone was there to yell out timber at all
in a place like this where you're surrounded w/darkness
it's hard for anyone to embark its....
so cold outside and the weather remains ever-changing
like the patterns of your life when there steady re-arranging
and it seems so strange now that all the colors dissipated
now your growin agitated cuz it's not what you anticipated
so your trying to change back to a more familiar mode
but your feelings are so built up your about to explode
about to corrode, your mind is travelling down the wrong road
now your detached from yourself like 3rd person point of view
steady confused no matter which route you decide to choose

i replied to Mirrors, Repetitive Occurences and Dev's Untitled
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Last edited by Diverse : 01-19-04 at 02:52 PM. Reason: forgot some stuff
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Old 01-19-04, 02:51 PM   #2
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yo nice shit bro, basic, deep and simple, flow was tight but proply coulda used a lil more vocab but your wordplay and multi's made up for that and I really like the closing line really finished the piece off nicely. only thing I do really wish for though was this to maybe be longer and maybe a hook added but dope shit bro keep droppin.

peep my collab with Yaz called "Stories of Old" and leave some feedback, muchly appreciated and thanx in advance. peace.
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