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Old 01-19-04, 05:01 PM   #1
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[B]~battle spit (not written)~[/B]

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~WaRm Up~

my words disinagate ur verse nd make ur lines disappear like ~over driven interstates~/
u gonna ~pay~ for ~callin~ me out like ~long distance minute rates~/

~DeAtH mOdE~

wen u ~freeze coke~ is the only time u have ~hard lines~/
even if u learned ur ~times tables~ u still wouldnt be good wit ~nines~/
the only way u would beat me is if ur ~wakness~ was ~contagious~/
im ~off the chain~ like dogs ~outta cages~/

~FiNiSh HiM~

u talk like u do ~drive by's~ u prolly aint even ~gotta car~/
u should be peddlin a ~unicycle~ not juz cuz u ~ride solo~ cuz u ~cant handle barz~
~ExTrA~

my words are like ~hypnosis~ they'll leave u in a ~verbal vortex~/
put the glock in ya mouth nd blow out ya ~cerebral cortex~/
imma as great or greater then ~tupac~ so ~i cant be beat~/
i'll put my ~foot~ in ya face to u can smell ~da~feet~/(get it defeat)
u come up to me tryin to ~start sumthin~, u cant beat me/
like ~Micheal J Fox~ wit alphabet blocks i'll leave u a ~shook G~/
ill take away ya ~pride~ if i think ur ~proud~/
or put ur brains on ~my speakers~ so u can ~think outloud~

just a sample of how i spit sometimes...... halla at ya kid>>that's from off the top of my dome yo~WaRm Up~

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Old 01-19-04, 10:38 PM   #2
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i'm upiin 4 feedback
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Old 01-20-04, 07:51 PM   #3
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That Word
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Old 01-20-04, 07:57 PM   #4
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..I don't know about this...I usally leave harsh remarks(often very true statements)..but this showed a little potenial..change your structure..

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Old 01-20-04, 08:00 PM   #5
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it was written, but i liked it.
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