Uppin # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dont Sleep On Dis Mothafuckas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vote Like Mofos Biatchs!!!!!!!!!!!

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Punches: Yo
Wordplay: Yo
Multis: Yo
Personals: Neither
Opener: Yo
Closer: Yo

Vote - Yo What Up

One-sided battle. ATL you need to extend your lines longer, you used about 5 words per line. Also, think up some creative punches , and flip some multis. Your verse was just too basic. Yo What Up had some hot multis that finished this battle alone.

yo ima start flippin-this-script, no need for an intro, cause everyone knows ima be rippin-dis-bitch/
im whippin-his-spit, this gay as bitch got nothin, wit his "crap" lines its obvious y hes "trippin-on-shit
Good wordplay.

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aight aight,

well' it's ovious who got ripped

flow was held by what up by far
punches also
basicaly what up took this in all catagories
please don't make me brake it own to much

the problem was that what ups vere looked like it was more cuz his lines where stretched
you didn't half to...

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Atl came with a decent flow. Not much wordplay and punches. Not many multis either. ATL's verse just wasnt an eypopper. Needs some elivation...

Yo had some decent multis, but some were forced. Had some hard punches, some not hard. Decent creativity. It was a cool verse.
Note:the dashes and quotation marks makes it seem like you think your readers are to stupid to motice multis, and wordplay. It's newbish. Your verse would be better withought it...

Overall, Yo got every catagory exept flow and structure, so he gets my vote

v/Yo

pleas vote on the link in my sig...

-W1

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^^^aight thanx for the votes homies.........

UPPIN # 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS MAKE IT COUNT FOOS!!!!!!!!!!!

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