Honestly its clear it aint my best work (no multies) but i felt it had to be put out i didn't finish it cuz i'm encouraging anybody to join in and make a verse (if it sucks i will throw an E-Brick at you) RhythemTendecies (sorry if i fucked up tha spelling),Dev,Penskills,Canuck tha rubba duck,Dimez,Emotion,Trapt Wit feel free

I’m sending prayers to anybody walking the face of the earth/
To the last born into a family that feels that he is here to be a curse/
Or the middle born forced to watch his parents become drug abusers/
Little sister tried it once but died and will forever be considered a User/
Big brother in jail won’t get out until his body is cold and his Soul free/
Feeling as if he in the world alone and a better day he just can’t See/
Prayers to the man on the wrong side of a soon to be shot Gun/
The drug dealer that would love to go to church but Sunday is when his best work Comes/
The woman unjustly called a slut when only thing she wants is Marriage/
The expecting mother in the hospital not knowing she is about to have a Miscarriage/
The parents of an abducted kid that knows today their child isn’t coming Home/
The inmate that has to hear his daughter cry through a jailhouse Telephone/
The robber that wants to stop but wasn’t taught any else for Wealth/
The son that has no idea that at this moment his mother is suffering from declining health/
And the woman suffering right now because a man decided he is having sex with her even if he has to force himself/
The college student that won’t get their dream job because their skin is Black/
The young man or woman with a knife at her wrist at the moment and is about to pull Back/
The daughter that suffers from sexual abuse daily from parents and feels she can’t flee/
The recently released inmate that wants to go str8 but being nobody will hire a parolee/

sshit

thank you, cuz i read your nursery rhyme shit and hopefully you think my shit is the opposite of yours, and since u posted that garbage u thought it was good. Don't do hate votes it make u look dumb

carm down it waz a joke i really thought it waz dope

appreciate it, do a verse on it (if its ANYTHING like that nursery rhyme shit i'll send you an ass whooping through your email)

Hmm..I got cats rats tape decks..oh yeah and hats...

don't mind penskills, he sniffs paint

yo read my new rap it better than nersary shit

ROFL^^^^...anywayz it was real dope...nice imagery...lacking multies...vocab..and complexity.....nice flow...

The robber that wants to stop but wasn’t taught any else for Wealth/
The son that has no idea that at this moment his mother is suffering from declining health/
And the woman suffering right now because a man decided he is having sex with her even if he has to force himself/
The college student that won’t get their dream job because their skin is Black/
The young man or woman with a knife at her wrist at the moment and is about to pull Back/

^^^deep....

anywayz overall...4.2/5...good shit...keep elevating.....

Since I Replied To Yours I Suggest You Do The Same To Be Fair...Thanks...

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