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just some bs off the top of da head
IP: C1DA C961
i got demons screamin from my penis,
why'd i fuck britney she has mad diseases, now im at the doc's getting cleaned out , damn why did i bang that out?? i should have pulled out and let loose in her mouth but her shit was twitching it felt to good to switch postions, i was bent but this shit was hitting youd have to be there, me knee deep in pussy shit shaved straight bare, i was straight grizzly tearing it up without a care, i was just a killing that cunt , busted a nut, grabbed a blunt rolled up smoked up picked my clothes up told that hoe to hold up grabbed my keys and bounced went to dre copped a half ounce went to smoke and started pissing blood on the couch no control of my bladder pain rising like a ladder, house on fire shit didnt matter all cause of dat girl i wanted so bad to tag her the pain is relentless the damn weed and liqs got me into dis is it gonna end cause i fucked a bitch i had dreams of being rich and shit now im da kid who caught some virus from a syren or cryus i see flashing lights but hear no sirens what the fuck!! thank god im in my truck and i really didnt fuck the lil slut or i would be a charity wit my pics on a bus wow im bent as always but hit this up tell me what you think bs or what the fuck ever |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
^ cool sig..far as your flow..it was average..nothing I haven't seen before..it another flow without a good content...
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IP: C1DA C961
cmon peeps hit this up tell me what you think
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
Yeah this was alright here....structure was ok, could be touched up in a few spots though i think....content needs some work though....try adding some multies to this to make it a bit better....flow in this was alright, it stayed on point pretty well....keep at it.
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IP: 399E F0FD
yo thanks for the honesty its a rarity here
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