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5 | 83.33% |
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01-25-04, 12:45 PM
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01-25-04, 01:28 PM
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IP: 244A F706
I don't see the problem.. had a nice opening, nice closer.. my rhymes stayed consistant. had punches. not as many but still had them. creativity? wordplay?... is everything all ppl look at now is punches? plus ive seen some of his punches in battles here before.. originality? just my opinion... keep up the honest votes.. this was a good battle.
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01-25-04, 02:32 PM
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IP: 244A F706
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01-25-04, 04:05 PM
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camrok - good structure........flow was pretty good.........vocab was ok........pretty tight multis.........wordplay was ok.........some of the punches hit hard........good personals......
typo - structure was ok.......flow was good........vocab was pretty basic........some of the multis were good........wordplay was aight........i was feelin some of the punches, some were wack though.........ok personals..... conclusion - camrook takes this in flow, multis, punches, and personals so he gets my vote...... VOTE - CAMROK
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01-25-04, 07:35 PM
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IP: D917 C89A
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01-26-04, 03:00 PM
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IP: 244A F706
Uppppinn (5) lets get the damn votes up!
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01-27-04, 12:50 AM
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Cam won this. He actually thre punches. Typo, there a self glorification cypher, check that shit out. Anyway, Cam had a few decent punches, both were kinda whack, but elevation will come. Peace
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01-27-04, 03:04 PM
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Punches: Cam
Wordplay: Typo (had one) Multis: Cam Personals: Cam Opener: Cam Closer: Cam You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how Best line, this line could've been so fucking ill if you added another wordplay, like this You couldn't 'Stand Up' to 'Bullies' if Ludacris showed you how Not m uch thought in it, but if you pu a little more in it, that line could've been really good. Vote - Camrok
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01-27-04, 08:12 PM
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cam took this....typo lacked punches that hit hard sum were played both flows were aight i suppose.......personals closer finisher all go 2 cam typo elevate kid try improve ur punches and personals and u will/shud elevate
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01-28-04, 01:32 AM
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this was an ok battle..cam u had a good structure and flow, sum of the punches hit....typo u'r structure was aight, flow culd of been betta, punches were close but i think camrok edged it in punches. vote-camrok
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02-01-04, 01:42 PM
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Honestly dis battle was kinda aight...........Camrok did a good job throwing his punches and was more of an enjoyment making me actually laugh, you could kinda say. Typo was good with his punchs except da one's about MC hammered was fuckin whack as hell mde me laugh from da corny-ness of da context. Both were pretty weak in dis battle and could of did better, but seeing dat a battle all comes down to dissing your opponent i'll have to go with Camrok harder hitting punches and was consistant with it unlike typo who didn't keep it up.
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02-03-04, 04:56 PM
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man i wish i could just break this batttle down in categories cuz i feel it was one sided
typo- you came with some decent lines.. nothing that really hit hard though.. you had alot of filler in your rhymes like that line bout being able to make mollases slick.. dont put lines like those in your verse those arent disses.. and your punchlines were weak.. your wordplay was mediocre.. i aint really see any mulites thrown in your verse your shit was just average camrok- you had some clever lines in this battle "Im'a delete this typo, give his rep a reduction I'll take out his fat ass like lypo-suction " "Today hasn't changed, this rhymes bullying ya now You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how" these are the type of punchlines that win you battles.. and those lines and the rest of your verse had nice disses in there vote- camrok
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