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Old 01-25-04, 04:30 PM   #1
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Hip Hop Alias

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Hip Hop Alias

Chorus twice

Word up, The industry we didn’t suspect to succumb/
Has been reduced to rubble thanks to you son/
It has come, without warning or thoughts of advance/
Its like tango with the enemy, the Devil shares the dance/
Conscious heads know what we deserve of/
Do unto others, without our respect or love/

Check it, watch how kids get easily influenced/
When they watch gangster idols purposely talk foolish/
Speaking gats, and murder is there fashion and lingo/
Fairytales, and dramas are what MTV Raps hosts/
Not to excuse these artists, what’s the bargain/
That a rapper can threaten to kill, but the charge gets pardoned/
Look what has started, and television provides sanctuary/
Praising false Gods while they put men into mortuaries/
I speak now cause it’s a repetitive cycle/
How they get away with it, two words, “My dough”/
This is a title that MCs wear, deadly positions bestowed/
Tupac to Big L, glamour mansion to clouds/
And now they proud, sporting their bullet wounds/
Laughing how 2 inches further, they be resting eternal in tombs/
Nah, this isn’t about to decipher their intellect/
But then again, toting nines and techs, is how he relieves stress/
The theory of distorting your own mentality to cope/
With the realities of life, rather work desk than sling coke/
But then again, if you broke, times not fucking simple and easy/
Striving and still can’t pay rent, the loan sharks patience squeazy/
Listen to me, children adore these stories, another rags to riches/
They cop a glock, jump other Mafia Boss, face left with stitches/

Chorus twice

The weapon is loaded, and the tip explodes profusely/
Someone found another case, gang star trying not to lose g’s/
Reign of terror ended in disaster, lead shells leave parka tattered/
Crew battered, demise was inevitable, whatever, doesn’t matter/
But lives get shattered, it revolves around music’s violent/
Supported and applied at, by the Hip Hop worlds finest/
It’s the kind that, drives Peace Corps to slow insanity/
Fake alias, name robbery, this switch up that occurs bothers me/
Though you were the baddest, yesterday this was your domain/
Now some junkie repping the Streets of Main, begging for cocaine/
Morphene and Peyote to stop the pain, without dignity/
Black Jack, you’re the spade, the end cause by our negativity/
You hear the Master resemble a crisis to the receiver/
The Ceremony then makes the audience a believer/
Dominate male figure, don’t look my way, gun cocks/
Inspired rapper, gave up selling rocks, to end up like Tupac/
What a shame…another brother deceased, never understand peace/
And a passport to Notre Dame, instead of a gun in his jacket crease/

Chorus twice…beat quiets.
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Old 01-25-04, 08:25 PM   #2
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Someone Reply To One Of My Open Mics That Are Recent. Uppin For Someone To Reply To This....typed It Up Today.
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Old 01-25-04, 09:25 PM   #3
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Yo frankly i thought this was good.

Dominate male figure, don’t look my way, gun cocks/
Inspired rapper, gave up selling rocks, to end up like Tupac/

Nice line....Easy to read flowed very well and smoothly....Topic was nice i can see where your comin from.....Nice drop........Hit me up anytime wit your new work....Thanks for the feedback on my piece i ask if you ever have the time look up my other work......Good shit dawg....
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Old 01-25-04, 09:29 PM   #4
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Thanks for the reply...considering no one will give feeback..Uppin this for feeback....Comment or criticize...
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Old 01-26-04, 05:55 PM   #5
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Uppin for feedback.....Would like some comments, maybe even a breakdown? Would appreciate...Uppin...
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Old 01-29-04, 07:35 PM   #6
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HAHA....Uppin this again...I want more feeback...Seriously, I would appreciate if someone hit this up...I will return the favour.
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