my car isn't done, complete the job or its back to the county fair with you

Uppin..cause I'm dope and I can..

I like the seriousness and some of the comedic parts in your poetic rhymes

nice job...again..i like your concepts and stories...rhymes are good and flows well...
what else can i say, you're one of the best here.. :}-~.... peace

not bad, but not too good,
and not even close to perfect
like that one bitch said ..
keep writing though.. pz

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