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Old 01-28-04, 10:28 PM   #1
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its kinda nice when i write i dont even have to listen to music
my lifes what i write from now on ill prove it /
i movewd it / ima write for ever show improve kid
im due shit this goes out to not guilty in prisons
so lets get in this mind time to show you my visions
brown paper bag / pepsi cans / incissions
basements / wax / tracks and provisions /
clouds animatin gotta turn makin visions /
talkin to the cloud controllers / during visions /
im hearin voices in my head / and they not mine /
telepathic zone downtown alone doin crimes im
sharp even when im not there feelin fine /
still hip hops friends till the end like chucky /
no more bein / the joker / but im gettin sucky sucky /
its not / vietnam but she wanna fuck me n suck me /
never duck me / im duckin her i aint shook /
people think they scarin you readin janes books /
tryin to con a con / whos runnin wit the same crooks? /
no pain / no gain / no fame / so look /
the realest of real / i don even need a heater /
my girl names tanita / digits off the metre /
beed bags and twine / some patches an a needle feeder
tell undercovers im makin lighter covers to treat her /
now you can take this however you please please say it loud /
and dawg whatever you do / just say it proud /
i bin known to throw it down on a lowered net in ya driveway
you wanna see shaq / aight / ill be write back /
bin known to write signs stand in line at the side of the highway
bin known to tag shit with no skills at all /
bin known open bag no tag sayin fill it all /
cant be up to mischif anymore its too risky /
gotta wonder bout you / when you lip me /
people tellin me all day that my names on the scanners /
im on FRS radios in codes beyond mars landers / yo /
im goin into buildings and right out the back door /
my path is a maze gotta blaze wit a crack whore /
she flyin low / and she beggin for the back door /
im out like the gout this / bitch is a crack whore /
code 007 code 911 code 666 / shit im just blowin up /
misusin codes wonderin why i aint showin up /
whos he? your cousin? im buzzin. you buzzin cousin? /
i pack godfather dutches an im lovin tussin /
if you aint lovin that shit you aint lovin nothin
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Old 01-29-04, 12:45 AM   #2
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you've bin known to do alot of shit.

i pack godfather dutches an im lovin tussin /


I like tussin
what in the who now?

telepathic zone downtown alone doin crimes???

you thought there would be people in the telepathic zone?
you are definately alone there..where exactly is that???

i movewd it / ima write for ever show improve kid

yeah you're gonna have to write forever....

k whatever im out...
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Old 01-29-04, 11:08 AM   #3
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tussin...robotussion you fool....i aint explainin nuthin to a craked out wanna be...whatever....im out 2...
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Old 01-29-04, 11:09 AM   #4
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why aeybody tellin me to quit, and sayin i aint shit. aeybody frontin,...wtf??
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Old 01-29-04, 02:15 PM   #5
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I thought you were quitting man? what happened?....but anyways this was ok....lose the / at the end of your lines though....the flow in this was alright.....content was ok i thought....but overall this was ok, just keep elevating and keep at it man.
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