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Old 01-29-04, 04:12 AM   #1
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Fuck you want?? - Ft. Credz

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Credz

Its like…it happens on every damn piece you drop…
IMing me, “Credz leave feed” ya never cease to stop…
Its link after link you give me, do ya really think I care?…
Ya get hostile and say “Motherfucker the links right there”…
But its like why the fuck are you even asking me?!…
But I be nice and I go peep it so I’m passing feed…
Do you return it?! Hell no! so why the fuck should I!?…
Do ya want the truth or should I say ya had good rhymes?…
Cause half of you people that ask me sucked fucking ass…
Ya excuse for that is “I did it when I ducked fucking class”…
Apparently it shows which one it was…your english…
Brings me to the point…why are you even in this???…
And why do ya PM me saying “sorry I didn’t follow rules”…
Well while your on my dick, might as well swallow too…
Just because im a mod you think I can answer all your calls…
IMing and PMing with FL problems!? I cant solve’em all…

Da fuck u want ? u need get a life!
So stop herrasin us
We might mod here o.O but yo .. we are not your wifes


Edicius

Sick of it , it makes me sick, please people release our dick's
u see a 's' sign? on our chests? best resign get a life & fuck ur nick's
''Its me , I am him , I am dope, ..MEH! I am not ur dawg!
See i dont care, if u want help but this has to stop.!!
so fuck u & 'your squad'
Im not god! o.O how many times u need explenations
''i cant make u a fucking mod!''
Damn these kids today, they love modpowers & at nights they pray..
& Iunno but, are u also thinking about it on a normal scool day?..
That u when waking up the next day being a mod of your forum..
damn its so pathetic please stop, rb is not life..
is a place to go when u surrounded w/ boredom..

Bleh!! Nothing special keystyled, stil..Enjoy.
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Old 01-29-04, 04:31 AM   #2
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nice concept, and totally true...lol..... made for an interesting read, both really hit it right..... made me laugh,,,, sounds like you 's getting pissed a bit... original.... nice little collab here, enjoyable read....
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Old 01-29-04, 04:31 AM   #3
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lol can i be a mod ed... i mean ur sek-c like that
an' my gangstah squad be holdin it down the the heat
best rekognize!.
nah nice peice
flows good. nice keystyle by ed.lmoa so funny shit
drop a second chapter collab 2nd.time.
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Old 01-29-04, 04:34 AM   #4
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yea nice piece man enjoyed reading it, you've got some skillz. keep it up.
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Old 01-29-04, 05:04 AM   #5
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this is the best verse ive ever read in my life. the lyrics are soo meaningful. especially edicius'. u musta spent hours on this.

btw... wheres my cd at fool!!??
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Old 01-29-04, 05:07 AM   #6
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LMFAO..U aint gettin it, .. u payed me 10$ im charging 20$ = )
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Old 01-29-04, 05:16 AM   #7
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hahah...
Good song to do it on...had nice lines, good flow...
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Old 01-29-04, 11:28 AM   #8
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lmao....nuff peeps wanna mod these days but r plums...

both keys had me lmao....

funny shit...
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Old 01-29-04, 11:59 AM   #9
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lmfao....that was good....credz you're hilarious, i like the scheme, you went well together and on topic....good and funny.....nice job guys :}-~
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Old 01-29-04, 12:30 PM   #10
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Funny shit..it's nice to see credz do something different(lately you've been singing the blues~~~)Ed's verse was also funny and dope..good shit fellas..
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Old 01-29-04, 01:26 PM   #11
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pretty funny...good job guys...complimented each other well keep droppin...
vocab was okay..nuttin special....Lookin forward to Credz stuff..

holla my batttles...
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Old 01-29-04, 04:08 PM   #12
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Thanks, Upping.
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Old 01-29-04, 04:24 PM   #13
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Great little frustration rhyme ya'll got goin...

Real nice wordplay, sarcasm...

Good emotion from both, though I've never heard of Credz...

Good formatting and flow from both...

Pretty much, nothing wrong with either of them.

Nice bitch session.

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Old 01-29-04, 04:34 PM   #14
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You guys seemed a lil frusterarted....
Nice way to let off some steam...
I liked creds part tha best...nice flow
Didn't really get eddy's flow
But keep it up...
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Old 01-29-04, 05:52 PM   #15
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LOL...this was funny..

A lot of true points..and some nice lines
Credz your flow was good..and so was your vocab for the most part, i thought you had a good verse...nice concept

Ed..same thing..good verse flow vocab etc..

This was a good piece though...witty and well different from a lot of things on RB...i enjoyed it...well done
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