who else you know can shine like this
who else you know got jewelry that can blind like this
im in the lime light bitch
my rhymes tighter than ropes tied in a knot
weed heads follow me cus the dope rhymes that i got
and all yall niggas has been misguided
cats is hardheaded so i put my four fifth by it
i still go no love for any of you pussies
its not enough pro's and too many of you rookies
yall cats is soft like charmin tissue
no triccs up my sleeve just my arm and a pistol
eversince they heard me spit they been tryin to get rid of me
its like the more rhymes i write the more i get enemies
so the more i sip henessey
i can kill you dudes with a weapon or verbally
like im goin on a murder spree
i make dudes sicc that havent even heard of me
only way i'll stop rappin is if the D.C. snyper murders me
my words spread quicclyto other countries
eatin cats like i smoked weed and had the munchies
you need the facts that im illest just look at my kill list
of mc's i done slayed mics i done burned
im the newest shit this year like memph bleeks M.A.D.E.
any yall wanna test of, that my teccs will clap
and you'll be a one hit wonder like the girl who made my necc and my bacc
should of thought twice before you fucced with the greatest
said you was prepared should of tied your shoes instead you tucced in your laces who can phase this yall cant touch me yall cant even graze this
you a horrilble dude i leave you lost and confused like you was stucc in a maze bitch

OK peice...flow got weak as the verse went on...
but good in spots...sounded more like an audio than a text...
up your vocab, multis, metas, and wordplay...and work on your flow...
but you did have a few hot lines...my favorite...

"yall cats is soft like charmin tissue
no triccs up my sleeve just my arm and a pistol"

anyway...keep flowin and elevate...