Ok Proof. You had a nice structure adn ya flow was only off by a little bit. Your lines were a little simplistic and your punches weren't really that hard hittin. If youchange that youll be pretty good. Village came pretty good with the personals and punches(Played on his av and name too much)but ya structure was fucked up and threw ya flow off a bit. Alright battle though.

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Open Battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111055

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861

If I could vote I would, But thid diffenitly goes to the pimp himself.

ya'll vote on this it's blazin' lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...642#post1184642
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Uppin' #1....... Ya'll need to stop sleepin' on this shit...
I will return votes if ya leave a link so stop sleepin'.

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Uppin' #2....... Ya'll need to stop sleepin' on this shit...
I will return votes if ya leave a link so stop sleepin'.

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Uppin' #3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Come On....................i'll Return Tha Favor

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villgepimp
verse was pretty weak, you had sme nice attempts at wordplay, often lacked a little bit, punches were good an bad, no reall killers, strucutre was off, lines were stretched,
which kind of made i boring to read!!!

proof
nice structure, but everything else lacked, your pnches were more like one of those freestyle you just do pissin about, they wernt punches just filler, you attempted a few,
not much wordplay an i can't say your ryhme scheme was the best, you just need to elevate, an keep at it.


vote villagepimp
he had punches, wordplay, an proof didn't , both had weak verses though not an enjoyable battle to read, but there can only be one winner!!



plz drop an honest vote on this
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111834

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Uppin' #4................ COME ON!!!! END THIS!!! I WILL RETURN VOTES
Thanks to everyone who's voted so far

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C'mon...... You people are slow..... finish his ass off!!!!!!! Uppin' #5............

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Punches: Village, Proof had no real punches, so Village takes this one wiyjout doubt
Wordplay: Neither, no worpdlay in both verse, get some in there
Multis: Proof, had a few 3 syllable rhymes, villages just barely rhymed even if it did
Personals: Village, had lines talking about he was a newb, Proof was trying to defend himslef in his verse
Opener: Village, proof had nothing but flow in his opener
Closer: Village, same as well, nothing but filler from Proof

Vote - VillagePimp

Proof you need to work on basic punches, a comparison between 2 things, think some up, and try again next time. All I can really say. Village, your ryhmes were barely there, make sure everything flows nicely.

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yo, thanks for the votes Brethren, menolin, & Killa.... It helps to have people who actually vote on others battles. I'll hit up your battle brethren

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my votes goin to village pimp check out my battle for teflon and vote too while your here