that actually does help, i would never think to do that, even though in 8 mile proof says

Punish Rabbit Or Obsolete Futer or PROOF

can a mod please close this and my battle with set-ignorance

T west
Now everybody listen as I tell you the story of the creation
As I present the PROOF of why rap is experiencing declination
Hmm ok personal I guess 4/10
Kids are dumb nowadays, pop rap songs are what they dwell
This guy is living PROOF......come on.........he likes D12
Takin the proof thing a little far & not a strong punch 3/10
Now I could rap all day, about taking out herbs like you
But then KFC would accuse me of taking their spices too
KFC is played dont reall get the spices part but ok 3/10
You don't belong on the rap scene, its your location you forget
He's from Denver...
...Shouldn't he be at sum restaurant then...serving nuggets
No rhyme? an weak 3/10
This guy aint Go-in nowhere, since we ain't playin karts
I dont even need a finisher,,,since I won this from the start
Played but decent 5/10
TOTAL: 18/50

Proof

Aiyyo, hows the weather up in the canada ehh?/
ur fuckin childish, u still beleive in santa today/
Weak 1/10
goin up against me, T West verse PROOF/
its fuckin one sided, like DMX vs Snoop/
Weak 2/10
halladay is torontos one and only hope/
thats funny though, we had the same coach/
Weak 1/10
yeah its hard to take but he went to school in arvada/
if you dont believe me, i wont get mad atcha/
Weak .5/10
but look up his coaches name, i bet its coach capra/
u must be high, to battle me, u didnt think id attack ya/
Weak 2/10
siitin there in ur seat usin some visine/
cause u cant read the computer, ur tryin to keep ur eyes clean/
WACK -1/10
TOTAL: 5.5/50

Weak battle but west gets it cause he attempted to throw punches

u dont get it, i really do go to the same school halladay went to, he went to arvada west, his coach was capra, and i guess its my fualt, becuase im the only one who knows what im talking about

Add a (*) beside verses like that and explain them at the end. It would have helped alot

ok, i just gotta practice, i need to battle newbs, or justs weaker emcee's

meh..this battle wasn't that great
both need to elevate...T-west
you had good concepts for ya punches
Horribly worded though..ya wordplay was good
Liked tha nuggets/KFC...umm
Proof..you had really basic rhymes...
Your wordplay wasn't there
You kinda went of tha subject of battling during ya verse
tha coach thing...wasn't feeling it
dmx vs snoop...wasn't feeling it

v/ Twest

uppin for final vote please.......................

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T West vs. Kizza

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T West vs. Kizza

My vote would have to go to T-west: Wordplay a little better...flows looked to be more fluid
Proof: That fictional character punch was kinda lame and whats up with dmx vs. snoop? Just need to work on more fluidity in ya rhymes better punches..

i voted on yours now vote on mine:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111495

uppin for final vote please.......................

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Currently Open Battles:
T West vs. Kizza

yo i would vote for t-west, i hated that santa line, but it was a perfect rhyme and sounds good, anyway, i cant vote so it doesnt really matter, but overall T West takes it, and can anybody hit up my battle with Malice or Puertoricanelly

im uppin this 4 u t west, someone vote 4 him, he needs one more vote and he wins