Aight...hold up...lemme check these keys to see if they on tight enough..Nope..but who gives a shit

....Let me see ya rap release form..or Wise'll seize
Ya whole fucking keyboard..& leave you with keys
..All over tha place..scattered across tha ground
Battles aren't sex with corners..
....................................but I'm fucking around
Crushing ya atoms..to show u..u never mattered
Ya elevation took a fall..and just left u shattered
Whip this bastard.. i ain't talking about eyelashes
point guns to our heads..to see who'll die fastest!
Got rhymes mastered..yea..I'm tha king of tha hill
Who flows better than smll vitamens..drinking a pill
Thinking to kill
& Wise Ways will like Timothy Dalton i got a lisence
Put tha nosel to ya temple..& make u have a cricise
I didn't even write this..& authors are offering books
Bring out tha bad habits in u..like u talking to crooks
& Fuck girls..Cuz in this bitch its emcee's gone wild
Lift'n weights w/ fingers..look at my keys strong style
....Wise'll Dog pile on ya face..& put my full force on
Stacking up my sluts & that prolly equals a whores ton
Hit u up with four guns..not clip u..but pistol whip u
Grab ya writtens as a whole..then rip tha shit in two
Call tha cops! quick! do it now..before my call stops
Hate dealing with herbs..
........Tha bitches talking tough before they balls drop
That shit don't bug me..how these wack fuckas tug me
...But really they punches smaller than dicks in rugby
Man..please don't step..I'll wreck ya with all specifics
Cuz my freestyles..were actually carved long ago....
.................................................. .In hydroglphics


Keyed like whoa yall....enjoy

Pretty enjoyable.
Structure on point..flow good.
Some blank shots..
But overall good...funny at points.



I like the first line with the matter-atom link.. witty.

& more quotables like that where included.

Overall nice piece dope Keystyle.

Return the favour?

dope...i like this whole thing...nice key from you wise..keep droppin..like that... respond to both me and ace's thingz please

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^already have..and thanks
Anymore feedback?

dope punches in this one...definitely back to the level i'm used to seeing from you....tight spit, very creative wordplay...not really much to say, good as usual was what i was thinking in my mind after i read it...just keep it up...if you find time will you drop an honest vote on this topical battle?

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