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Old 02-03-04, 03:01 PM   #1
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The 3 Deadly Shakespeare Books

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The 3 Deadly Shakespeare Books



Taming Of The Shrew

Emcee's get Tamed behind my lines of pain
and watch as I reverse males into broads and dames.
I rearrange the Shakespearian lingo at my rivals, Now
call my Disses Undercover the way I -Dis Spies- U (Despise)
Wolverine the anatomy I got Keen sense to rip a Flesh
More clever then best and more Sharpe to kill a Vet.
My victims eat my Shrewd side and I stay Taming bad vibes
at the end of this script all of U will have subscribed.
Hypnotized from the lines that I display.
Then tame your body movements then kill you at the
-End Of This Play-

Much Ado About Nothing

Love of death and deceit is in the air from sexual suffering
I strive on violence so for me this is Much To Do about Nothing.
Spitting vicious acts and slurs call me the Don John of lyrical Warfare
setting up traps and being discrete with raps no watch how I -Diss Appeare-.
in this Shakespeare act I am the cause of broken hearts
laughing at my own mischief and send Conrade to do dirty deeds
in the Dark. Spark confusion in the kingdom fianlly Finishing
my brother Don Pedro and his legions. See I am the true reason
and meaning that there is -Much Ado About Nothing-

Othello

Just like the first two of my books but more worse
I am the character Iago Othello's love Curse.
Listen to the viciousness of my words that make heads swerve
from lines of lies and throwing deadly assaults to watch him Die.
Interracial marriages I Iago dispise, Finding it Blatant
So therefore I will stoop to any level to kill a black man.
Listen to my laugher of an angry ignorant hatred fan
my plan is to kill all Othello's so ya'll can be famous
and have your name written in the legends of the 3 Deadly Books Of
-Shakespearians-


No sleeping on this piece..It will be much appreaciated
Oh yes I am Black
The character Iago I was playing his roll
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Old 02-03-04, 03:39 PM   #2
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Word bio good to see you reppin it on the open mic.....You got a really unique style i like it alot...deep with the shakespreare thing man....some thoughtful lines and good multis all the way through./....a good read post your shit in the crew forum more often i'm always interested.......word out of 10 i would give this open mic a seven....things to improve on ...your overall flow there we times when i lost it...but still very nice...maybe use a bit more elevated vocab too...........7/10 good read
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Old 02-03-04, 03:49 PM   #3
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Thanks for the critique
Yeah my flow can fall threw sometimes
As for vocab my next piece will be titled
Intelligence you will see a lot of vocabulary
In that piece..

Ty once again on input
Uppin.
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Old 02-03-04, 07:29 PM   #4
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U lazy people....
Respond got damn it...
Inspiration this place is dead...
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Old 02-05-04, 04:00 PM   #5
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yo bio
i told u i'd hit u up on this
first book came off hot, second hotter and third off tha hook
like the book concept, really put shit in different points of view and shows your diversity
on topic as i assume u you always are, and hot shit over all
nothin to really complain about here.... maybe make the lfow a bit easier to follow.... but that could be what makes it unqiue. not your average joe flow
anyways i'm out
keep doppin
peace
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