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Baz187 |
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0 | 0% |
Blackgod |
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3 | 100.00% |
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I can't vote, because I don't have enough posts but, here's some feedback anyways.
Flow- Blackgod definitly was better in this one. His shit flowed alot better than Bas's. Blas, your flow was alright, but your structure could use some work. Punches/Personals- Again Blackgod was better. He had more punches that hit alot harder than Bas. Bas, your punches were way too simple. Try to be more creative .Both need to try and use more personals. Bas had the one personal where he flipped Black's name, but both need to include more. Vocab- Blackgod blew him out da' water in this category. Both though, could use improvement. Bas, your shit was very basic. Try elevating. Creativity- Blackgod again took it. His punches were alot more creative. Better use of vocab and concepts. Bas, your punches, were soft, way too simple, and were played.Not even close in this aspect. Overall - Blackgod, in my mind, was the clear winner. His punches hit harder, vocab was better, and showed alot more creativity. Bas187, You should try and develop your vocab and be a more creative with your punches. Your flow was alright, but structure needs work. Both should try and use more personals to become more effective. My vote goes to: Blackgod. |
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Punches: Black, had some pretty dope punches, Baz, you take the cup for worst verse ever. Seriously. Not to sound like Simon, but you fucking suck. Learn English, there is no hope of elevation from you. The hitting the street line was pretty dope.
Wordplay: Neither, wasn't any wordplay. Multis: Black used a few multi syllables, maybe 2's and 3's, good, nothing from Baz. Personals: Neither, neither had any personals, nobody knows nobody. Opener: Black, actual verse from Black. Closer: Black, again, a real verse. Baz, a punch is a comparison, compare two different things, try using a quote or phrase you mmight make something original. Vote - Blackgod Return the favor in my sig
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