I get penalized by missing pieces like these in the Open Mics because I rarely stray in here. It has become too e-hardcore for me. I see that you have the other two parts up. I'll read them, as well..

"And traveled the embattled lands and their filthy scenes.
Of roasted people, laying on their backs and still screaming
Still steaming! Some on fire, long dead, but still breathing."
^^ A powerful statement all on its own....

I never read a story of someone detailing their family's burnt remains of a nuclear holocaust. Dope story nonetheless. These are the pieces I enjoy reading.