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Gravity | 0 | 0% | |
Apathy | 4 | 100.00% | |
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02-05-04, 04:48 AM | #1 |
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apathy vs. Gravity
IP: A965 0752
Its all setup , I'll have my lines in twenty, probably less.
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02-05-04, 05:25 AM | #2 |
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Gravity vs. apathy
IP: A965 0752
Wit' Gravity for a name you'd think dis' cat was "down", but check this...
This clown spits so much hot air he has to wear anvil for a necklace! I'm a sexist textist, so I don't like to flow against bitches... I'm convinced that i've seen better structure on styrofoam bridges! Are you religious? Well if not you will be after you read this... The shit you jot is so played, that you coudn't be saved by Jesus! Please just, leave this forum because you can't afford to stay... Why don't you save your self the trouble and throw your key board away! Say, you should practice some breath control,youve' got loose lips... Couldnt keep apathy out ya' mouth if da script came eqipped wit toothpicks! You should stick to your job of dickriding or take a permanent vacation... Yes its affirmative, you and your moms share the same occupation! |
02-05-04, 07:33 AM | #3 | |
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IP: B793 6FD4
yo dude sory this took so long but yo check this out
ya seeking for 'attention' looking for a 'metion' i should av let ya have abit more 'preparation' or even give ya abit of the doctors 'medication' ya see im doin all this for a good 'cause' to get a crews 'reputation' n now i'll 'pause'.......... n rap again wiyhout 'hesitation' me n my crew are as complex as a 'hurricane' causing destruction 'strain' n 'pain' for anything that comes in our way ya see ur ma enemy n i fuck up any 'enemy' thats stands right in front of 'me' ur lyrics are too 'vague' im so convinced im sure ya have got 'lyrical plague' u say ur a 'sexist' 'texist' bt ur nufin but a mother fuckin 'rapist' yo u should a stepped up ur pace 'abit' coz ur just simply too 'shit' this isnt a game or a race u should a realised that by 'now' its jus like overgrazing ya letting animals walk all over ya like ur mum shes a 'cow' anyhow i'll take a bow' n leave ya in peace right 'now' |
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02-05-04, 07:41 AM | #4 |
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IP: A965 0752
No problem, but maybe I should have mentioned that feeding is for herbs
( u say ur a 'sexist' 'texist' ) Just some advice for the next time you get merkd... |
02-05-04, 07:43 AM | #5 |
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IP: A965 0752
Uppin... Lets please get some votes in. Don't sleep on this. Even if you cant vote because you don't have enough posts, i would appreciate feedback/criticism. Thanks & Peace.
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02-05-04, 07:56 AM | #6 | |
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IP: CCBA F63E
If i could vote i would put it on Apathy, he had good lyrics
well they was good for a pillock |
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02-05-04, 08:33 AM | #7 |
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IP: A965 0752
Just a quick question for Jamie, what the fuck is pillock?
Don't get mad because I merkd you! |
02-05-04, 09:30 AM | #8 | |
Fuck yo couch
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IP: DD8A D068
Punches: Apathy, all decent punches
Wordplay: Noth much from either, I don't think I saw any Multis: Tie, both used an even amount of multis Personals: Apathy, good personals, the down line, Gravity had none Opener: Apathy Closer: Apathy Vote - Apathy
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02-05-04, 11:02 AM | #9 | |
Fuck yo couch
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IP: DD8A D068
Sorry, 2nd part of the vote
'lyrical plague' u say ur a 'sexist' 'texist' bt ur nufin but a mother fuckin 'rapist' yo u should a stepped up ur pace 'abit' coz ur just simply too 'shit' Gravity's best bar Wit' Gravity for a name you'd think dis' cat was "down", but check this... This clown spits so much hot air he has to wear anvil for a necklace! Best bar from Apathy, pretty hot. Apathy (Dope ass name)
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02-05-04, 02:58 PM | #10 |
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IP: A965 0752
uppin' #2 Lets get those votes in, shit. Don't sleep on this. Even if you can't officially vote because you dont have enough posts, i would still appriciate some criticism/feedback. Thanks
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02-05-04, 09:08 PM | #11 |
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IP: A965 0752
Uppin' #3 Lets get those votes in. Even if you dont have enough posts, leave some feedback,
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02-06-04, 12:35 AM | #12 |
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IP: A965 0752
uppin' for the last time, you mutherfuckers need to vote. I will glady return the feedback by voting on your shit. Peace
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02-06-04, 08:47 AM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 22D2 4A11
Just giving honest opinion:
Apathy's open: Quote:
It wasn't a personal, but it was a decent open,well structured, basic multies,flowed nice Gravity's open: Quote:
I think that's where it ended?? First structure, I can't really give a full opinion if I can't make (your) meaning of it It was good wording decent vocab , just needs to be DEFINED START STOP xxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx No personal or punches Elevate: Apathy's Line 3, 4, 5, 6 Quote:
Good structure, (they could be extended, but they are still defined!) good wordplay and flow, (so many syllables made it sound better) No punches or personal (If Gravity he better get it in these next lines) Damn dog I couldn't even read or put together a HARMONIZED DEFINED LINE STRUCTURE refer to the XXXX'S xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx So even if I were to strain myself to make meaning of the rest of your verse, that shit wouldn't slid in a 'real' battle and it prob won't slide here I got to give it to Apathy Just elevate Gravity read some tutorials Keep trying and bring it up and that goes for you too Apathy You got my vote, but if it were up against better punches etc I dunno Keep it moving! JamesJr.
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02-08-04, 09:27 AM | #14 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
apathy nice verse good use of vocab and clever wordplay
gravity tried to use a bit of vocab but it didnt flow well it was just a bit basic peep this and leave links vs Timeless http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1166316 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
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02-08-04, 09:33 AM | #15 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
vote-apathy
peep this and leave links vs Timeless http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1166316
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