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Old 02-06-04, 12:32 PM   #1
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Cold Siberian Sun

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The coldness in my heart freezes over, Soul gets heavy
Searching for the existence and requirements of a remedy
Darkness Translated into Melody…I’m Transfixed in Motion
Taking sips of Dark Black Potion…Black Heart, Wicked thought notions
I need to be balanced…Grab a hold of the mind state
Alcohol produces equilibrium…Brings me to the end of Fate
Cos my brain’s Apocalyptic…War torn by domestic feuds
Need to find salvation…N My troubles ain’t new news
Seek Happiness in My Guinness…Drink it til the Bottom
Endless Abyss of Alcohol covers my soul, Drowning in My Sanctum
Thought it would bring Happiness, Just a black pit of sorrow
Uncertainness in my life concerning Future Tomorrows
See the crows flying over head…A bird of prey hunting in 6th sense
Kind of like me…But I’m hunting for Bleak Deliverance
Trying to pay dividends…But can’t afford these Luxuries
Me in a pessimistic state…Dark Wolves chew away at me

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Dark Clouds Overhead rain pain upon my mentality
When in all actuality..It's my fault I think Sporadically
Vacant thoughts...Endlessly lost in my Sanctuary
Cold Siberian Sun..No Heat..Just a day in the ordinary

B.I.D
Indecisions Tamed..w/ the quick fix left Lifeless
cancelled thoughts Timeless..eternity is my Turf
coz i aint got no place to go..nor stumble or Faint
if you think my head is Corrupted,your wrong..it aint
I'm plain..jus a normal guy w/ Troubles galore
the heat instigating situations..i cant take it Nomore
my soul hits the floor..theres no spirit left in Me
Emotions so abrupt there tied up in a Frenzy
as I describe this Caper,jus feeling thoughts on paper
enthralled as a hater..on every person theres a Rater
another delivery Entertainer..but I aint got no Talent
see my Pool is left shallow..i dont feel nuttin Valent
about me..see I'm a coward at Heart..& in Mind
jus a scared fuckin Drunk..afraid to Look Behind
not deaf or Blind..jus a comical Git dumb to the World
not another feeling thrown..just another bottle Hurled

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Dark Clouds Overhead rain pain upon my mentality
When in all actuality..It's my fault I think Sporadically
Vacant thoughts...Endlessly lost in my Sanctuary
Cold Siberian Sun..No Heat..Just a day in the ordinary
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Old 02-09-04, 07:48 AM   #2
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Old 02-10-04, 11:15 AM   #5
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Aiight, This was v/ good.

BID and Kwizikz, You both compliment each others style, fairly similar, but i understand why, the flow was tight throughout, it could maybe do with some multis in, the vocab really stepped this up for the intelligent readers, the content on both behalfs was interesting, fresh and original concept. I enjoyed this reading this piece, so good job to both of you!!

good luck in the future guys. pz
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