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Mona Lisa.
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Cold Siberian Sun-the Peasantry ( B.I.D & Kwizikz)
IP: 9E53 07A2
Cold Siberian Sun Kwizikz The coldness in my heart freezes over, Soul gets heavy Searching for the existence and requirements of a remedy Darkness Translated into Melody…I’m Transfixed in Motion Taking sips of Dark Black Potion…Black Heart, Wicked thought notions I need to be balanced…Grab a hold of the mind state Alcohol produces equilibrium…Brings me to the end of Fate Cos my brain’s Apocalyptic…War torn by domestic feuds Need to find salvation…N My troubles ain’t new news Seek Happiness in My Guinness…Drink it til the Bottom Endless Abyss of Alcohol covers my soul, Drowning in My Sanctum Thought it would bring Happiness, Just a black pit of sorrow Uncertainness in my life concerning Future Tomorrows See the crows flying over head…A bird of prey hunting in 6th sense Kind of like me…But I’m hunting for Bleak Deliverance Trying to pay dividends…But can’t afford these Luxuries Me in a pessimistic state…Dark Wolves chew away at me Chorus Dark Clouds Overhead rain pain upon my mentality When in all actuality..It's my fault I think Sporadically Vacant thoughts...Endlessly lost in my Sanctuary Cold Siberian Sun..No Heat..Just a day in the ordinary B.I.D Indecisions Tamed..w/ the quick fix left Lifeless cancelled thoughts Timeless..eternity is my Turf coz i aint got no place to go..nor stumble or Faint if you think my head is Corrupted,your wrong..it aint I'm plain..jus a normal guy w/ Troubles galore the heat instigating situations..i cant take it Nomore my soul hits the floor..theres no spirit left in Me Emotions so abrupt there tied up in a Frenzy as I describe this Caper,jus feeling thoughts on paper enthralled as a hater..on every person theres a Rater another delivery Entertainer..but I aint got no Talent see my Pool is left shallow..i dont feel nuttin Valent about me..see I'm a coward at Heart..& in Mind jus a scared fuckin Drunk..afraid to Look Behind not deaf or Blind..jus a comical Git dumb to the World not another feeling thrown..just another bottle Hurled Chorus Dark Clouds Overhead rain pain upon my mentality When in all actuality..It's my fault I think Sporadically Vacant thoughts...Endlessly lost in my Sanctuary Cold Siberian Sun..No Heat..Just a day in the ordinary
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Uppin........Kwizikz
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Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
up up
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Aiight, This was v/ good.
BID and Kwizikz, You both compliment each others style, fairly similar, but i understand why, the flow was tight throughout, it could maybe do with some multis in, the vocab really stepped this up for the intelligent readers, the content on both behalfs was interesting, fresh and original concept. I enjoyed this reading this piece, so good job to both of you!! good luck in the future guys. pz |
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