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IP: C1DA C961
fuck all yall rappers that try to budge me/see through my eyes before you judge me/then consider if im an mc or a mistaken wannabee/ether way i wont give a shit /my depression allmost got me deep resten in a ditch6ft deep /hey bitch ready to go to sleep/cause i know your empty you should just give up/you didnt give up your empty cause i shot ass up/from these 12 guage slugs that penitrated this punk/but ja before you go i got one piece of advice/write this shit down it might come handy in the after life/dont start shit you know you cant finish/dishonest man you acted like a bitch when shit hit the fan/as dull as you are your considered plan/and you think your ass is getting it to the promise land/face it boy your just a wack bitch shame who somehow got lost in this rap game.
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IP: DF7B C8F7
poor transition and it wasnt helped with being in paragraph, its easier on the eyes in bars.... and try not to rhyme the same word over... this is the second ive read tonight thats dnoe it.... just work on it... expand on your rhyming aswell...
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