i made damn sure i added no d.r votes to da battle rules
coz before timeless gets banned all his votes are from dick riding fools
eh... The openign could have been more. Over all the punchs were weak
hes already pm'd me 3 times asking me to vote on his crap
if u think this ho can rap check ya eyes, ya visions blurred by cattaracts
eh.. i want proof.. f true ya makes this line pretty dope, but i dont see any so that ish ish eh. follow through could have been spit better
with lethal prescision i spit metaphores by da milion
killing more people den a jumbo jet collision
The bar is alright.. it had a weak metaphor though and could have been spit better alogn with harder punchs
sweat drips from rivals pores and drowns mc's gallore
while timeless spits his crap like its horse manure
the set metaphor was dope o thought, but you fell off with the follow through bar, it could have been alot better
fuck these last 2 lines peeps uve heard enough to decide
token just add the win straight to my record u know its certified
Play concept, i throw a line like the first one a few weeks back. Sort of self boasting wit the follow through.

You could have used alot better punchs, somethign more directed as well as metaphors that were a little better. Over all you should work on those then try for multis and a better flow


fucking hell code you fuckin chump, i'm starting to get over worked
i've already beat you 5-1 in this battle, So now ya gonna get merked
eh, the openign could have spit a punch a little betetr
ya went cryin to token makein excuses, so now were battlein new
you complained i reycycled,which i did. so now i'm recycleing you
feeling the anger in the bar which is helping you a little bit. although your lacking on punchs that are really directed
I left the shitty crew your still in, to join the voice of the streets
before i see ya tryin to battle elite again, you'll prob get 187 defeats
alrgith play off his name. good personal shots i suppose
you didnt *throw* any decent personals, cause I grappled ya fists
and i know ya Verses Are all *Bruised Up* caz bitch I Tackled Ya Spits
alright set, but ive heard the concept before. your follow through could have hit with more of a punch
and what the fuck was that hourse manure line, its so played and wack
you could of at least sed that when code-187 spits ya know hes talkin crap
heh, you fed off his line, but it was a nice flip over all
so thats the end of this bitch, you should lose coz dawg you've sinned
and even with this really shit verse against you i know its gonna win
you could have tryed harder on the ending, the punchs werent much

Over all you had a decent verse, the punchs were alright along with the metaphors but you culd have bumped them up a little.

Vote- Timless
He just came with more punchs i thought, along with a few less played shit in his bars.

Return the honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112998

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Thanks, but you forgot to poll vote, thats the secound person whos dun that in this battle!! am i eva going to win :-) uppin.....1 more

ohhh yea good spot, lol, i didnt even realize, thanks freeman!!