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02-10-04, 02:24 PM
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The Sky
IP: 40D6 EBC3
Day...
An inverted orb.. Concave mirror reflecting the paleness of the land An ever changing mass of colour... ... It is something that is never bland Ever swirling patterns.. Encrypted into the sky.. The cloud Tatooed masses of vapour... ... Imprinted on the blue background Colour so pure.. Smoothness erupts at you from every direction Such a deep and meaningful blue... ... It is truly perfection Sunset... The Sun collides with the horizon.. Releasing a magnificent array of beams Such a sight is unthinkable... ... Not even inside peoples dreams Awe inspiring vision.. Such a glorious wonder of the world to behold Amazing natural brilliance... ... Is something that never could be controlled Something so wonderful.. A sight that could easily be a mirage of the mind The horizon and the Sun become as one... ... Light and Dark start become intertwined Night... A mingled mass.. Shining array of pin-holes in the canvas of the sky Beautifully crafted by a master worksman... ... It could bring a tear to your eye Craning necks leer.. Dumb-struck faces all point upwards Sharp beams of light pierce... ... And gleam like polished swords Affection from the sky.. A message passed down through the night No matter how glum the face... ... The Sky can fill it with delight |
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02-10-04, 04:13 PM
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IP: 4287 3F49
This was dope. nice vocabulary.I enjoyed it
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02-10-04, 06:45 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 1424 2422
Your vocab made that sooo dope...I love the structure...All around Perfection.
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02-10-04, 07:03 PM
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IP: EB45 9824
grr i did this topic !!!!
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02-12-04, 05:42 AM
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IP: 23B6 2C04
Thank you all^...
Uppin... Pz... |
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02-12-04, 07:24 AM
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Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 047D 3076
dis was dope....nice vocab.....couldnt see much wrong wid is bro....keep it up....aaaiiiggghhhttt!!!!!
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More Gifted Than Christmas
Minds So Unclear Like Third World Water
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02-12-04, 06:23 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
perfect imagery!!!!!!!!!!! nice vocab, gud structure
..........fav part........... Sunset... The Sun collides with the horizon.. Releasing a magnificent array of beams Such a sight is unthinkable... ... Not even inside peoples dreams Awe inspiring vision.. Such a glorious wonder of the world to behold Amazing natural brilliance... ... Is something that never could be controlled Something so wonderful.. A sight that could easily be a mirage of the mind The horizon and the Sun become as one... ... Light and Dark start become intertwined keep droppin ....bless
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