Im the infection that runs thru your blood system
Misunderstood and so no body listens…
And so resistance is overcome with my persuasive power
Cos im a shower of temptation… like the virgin flower
Your devoured!… in laymen an evil growing in strength
Let commence by urges to resume… cos im intense
Im immense with influence… cos my brand burns deep
The rapid eye movement in your state of sleep…
I creep… and burn cells until emptiness dwells
In the depths of hell… another metaphor for life of pain
Delved in what’s to gain… but im play’n
It’s my game… slaying… with a dissolving blade
A man made infliction depicting the days…
I come in shapes… im baked… powdered and snorted
And bombed, injected in veins until your visions distorted
Local and imported… so my passports unique
With a photo of you… a 1 way stamp… Rest In Peace
Prematurely reaped… if you befriend my indulgence
A permanent defeat… brain damage and convulsions
Still wanna shake my hand… only, I was wondering?

This was a great piece......the topic not a lot of people touch on an when they do they bullshit an ruin it......but this piece was good......very touchy on the subject....loved it great imagery, good flow.....props!

Nice..Dev....I like this version much better...Good Job!!!!

thnx.....

uppin....... come on!

Your Ryme schem was Nice.. Kinda Different.. But Good..
the meaning of this is beter then the flow.. in my opinion..
it's good to see real emcee's here.. the ending hadda normal type of ryme scheme..
but it was nice..

g'luck..

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thnx...... any more?

nice work Dev..like was said, short but sweet..a lot of emotive linguistic devices worked in there. I was wondering, could you check out my latest, Coldest Nights..i would post a link....but i'm a busy girl! LMAO

its on the front page in open mic...you dont have to.

sure ill check yours out when im done what im doing....

Yo dev anotha good piece...great read cuz it was interesting, u came wit a rare topic cuz not many people flow bout drugs n stuff, ne wayz...the flow was nice n so was the vocab...very nice closer like said....very nice depth in this to, seemed to be like u flowed fo a drug program, tryin to get homies scurred o drugs but like evry one else has said very nice piece, good read, no flaws......keep rhymin homie


Peace

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