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wordplay 1 16.67%
Oakley 5 83.33%
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Old 02-12-04, 11:16 AM   #16
Oakley
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just so u kno....u said no personals*
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
his last battle down 0-1 to Killaconcepz
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
all his other battles he double-spaced his Bar's apart
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
He's 0-2 and he doesn't have any wordplay
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
thats the whole thing in his sig
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Old 02-12-04, 11:24 AM   #17
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yo token close my vote it was invalid i re read the whole shit and this fag dont desever my vote fuck this GAY MC acually u dont even desever to be called a gay MC u a nothing nigga..............................
 
Old 02-12-04, 07:47 PM   #18
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Old 02-12-04, 08:06 PM   #19
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ok wordplay i dint like it i wasnt feelin it and as for word play u didtn have ne it didnt have good strutcure and it didnt flow good punches were ok no multies ... ELEVATE

now for oakley that was hot shit i liked it i loved ur word play better punches and it flowed like water in to a glass um no mulites good strutcure good flow good vocab

my vote: oakley
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Old 02-12-04, 08:25 PM   #20
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iight...

Oakley

Word why are u here? when you belong in a promdress?
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
Lol... Personal... 7/10
Call a Pharmasist...You gon need summin to numb your face...
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
Made me laugh... Played im thinking... Still good... 7/10
Chalk line traced...your best play is to plead insanity...
It's clear ta see, Keep Goin...
An you gon' be endangered like them Manatee's/3
Stretched... 5/10
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
It's easy to see thru...The fact your whiter than Hanes/4
Hmm... Not feelin it... Im white... Dont be racist hoe... 3/10
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
Nice... 7/10

Overall... 29/50


wordplay


my name jumped the VS. stampeded em weak and verbless/
leavin' ya chained and burnin'...beggin' for gauze and surgeons/
Not bad actually... 6/10
oakley fucked up and battled someone better than/
half of this site, on one account, after my rhymes melted them/
Dont lie^... 4/10
after I retort, you'll require life support, you best aquire rhyme resource/
reply, and end up with shades, turned blades, with me applyin' force/
you can peep the morgue...after I leap the board/
Forced so badly... 5/10
retreat...before you recieve the beating you've been askin' for/
preda-tor, oh muther fuck a metphor, you couldn't turn a vote/
with a propellar, and a crooked new york senator/
Weak... 5/10

Overall... 20/40...


Your rhyme scheme is hard to follow...

v/ Oakley

Hit this up in return...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113832

Thanks...

Pz...
 
Old 02-12-04, 11:21 PM   #21
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Old 02-13-04, 12:26 AM   #22
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Old 02-13-04, 12:33 AM   #23
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ima end this right now, i bet when oakley saw that i was the last person to update he thought id give my vote to word, but man, he sucked. Oakley had a better flow, exept that one short line, i dont know why that was there, and he actually threw punches, and though he could have had more personals he had a nice one with the record. Wordplay, u hade an ok flow, with stretched lines, and about zero punches and personls, which is the main reason that oakley won this.

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Old 02-13-04, 12:33 AM   #24
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AIGHT..

Both of your flows were aight, but OAKLEY had better flow to it..
punches, ima have to give it to Oakley..they just STOOD OUT more..
your Vocab was equal..im leaning towards wordplay on this tho..


OVER-ALL..i think that Oakley got this..wordplay you didnt really have any good punches in my opinion..

vote-oakley..


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me VS lyrical-03
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113705

me VS oliverclohsoff
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661
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Old 02-13-04, 12:07 PM   #25
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Word why are u here? when you belong in a promdress?
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
^weak punch and an Ok personal
Call a Pharmasist...You gon need summin to numb your face...
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
^aight this is an ok simile punch.....
Chalk line traced...your best play is to plead insanity...
It's clear ta see, Keep Goin...
An you gon' be endangered like them Manatee's/3
^creative but came off kind of stupid......
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
It's easy to see thru...The fact your whiter than Hanes/4
^aight nice punch .....racist but nice.......
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
_^ok good closer good verse lots of personals .......not bad overall...._________________


my name jumped the VS. stampeded em weak and verbless/
leavin' ya chained and burnin'...beggin' for gauze and surgeons/
^ok this is a good opener....nice multis good wordplay/ punch
oakley fucked up and battled someone better than/
half of this site, on one account, after my rhymes melted them/
^kinda lost your flow on this one......not a good bar....
after I retort, you'll require life support, you best aquire rhyme resource/
reply, and end up with shades, turned blades, with me applyin' force/
^good multis, good wordplay....you got potential harness your skills more though...
you can peep the morgue...after I leap the board/
retreat...before you recieve the beating you've been askin' for/
^ok this is fine you already used leap though.........
preda-tor, oh muther fuck a metphor, you couldn't turn a vote/
with a propellar, and a crooked new york senator/
^hehe nice ending i like it...good shit...nice opener and closer....overall ok verse

This was a good battle Oakley came more consitent with personals which hit hard at times and wordplay banged out the multis with creative punches....I personally think that personal hit harder than multi punches and that Oakley just barely takes this one good effort by both MC's peace.
 
 


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