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ok, i'm writin right now, got caught up in work shit....

27 years old still postin on rap battle boards
ya chances in this battle were slim..
.... like janet jackson winnin a grammy award
roux told time in his check in...thats his most intelligent text
u ill...shit gary coleman has better chances in a slam dunk contest
u need a life even ya damn sig is boring kid
roux OD’d on exlax and still couldnt drop solid shit
been here since march 03 and u still aint an elite vet
only reason u on RB is cuz welfare paid for your internet
ya old ass rhymes are fatigued like a fat kid runnin laps
good try kid...but it wasnt meant to be...i guess homo’s just cant rap

slice this beef like kosher deli blades
ecoli should be afraid of my lyric marinades
blank ass file so he hides-his-past
put this fool-on-blast so his nerve-won't-last
you "come correct" in a kleenex at night
you're a no-handed jerk off in this one-handed fight
my verse is poison cause you like to bite
have you pukin up my words on your next pre write
swallow your pride like your boyfriends nut
if this battle were swords you couldn't "make the cut"

Ok this was a one sided battle. e.coli's little experience took this battle. He was much less played although both of you need elevation. e.coli threw some decent punches and had a couple potential filled concepts. While roux just needs some experience.

Keep your heads up.

V/ E.Coli

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

E.coli - nice metas.. made fa creative punches.. a few played lines but not enuff to drag ya verse down.. that 'exlax' line didnt make sense either.. but other than that good solid verse.. consistant an nice use of personals..

Roux - pretty nice vocab an concepts wiv regards ya metas.. but ya didnt turn them into decent punches.. the whole verse was kinda general an some punches were forced at best.. u need to get more personal about ya opponent.. then ull elevate alot more..

VoTe = e.coli

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1188764

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E.coli - Used a few good creative punches, good use of personals, overall..pretty nice.

Roux - Had multis flowin' about, but not many creative punches, vocab was tight along with ur mets but required more personals in my view.

Overall Vote : E.coli

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roux i wouldnt mind if u helped me up this

please vote

E.coli took this fairly easy....He had some pretty nice matas and punches...ok personals....Also had some played lines...but still a good solid verse...flow was pretty much there too

Roux...you came too basic...a lot of played lines and weak punches...all the sex lines were mad played..this was a decent line though
"blank ass file so he hides-his-past
put this fool-on-blast so his nerve-won't-last" cept get rid of the - - -...cause we know they're multis.

Overall my vote goes to E.coli for harder punches and personals and metas.

please drop an honest vote here..I took the time for you..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114158