dis was a very week battle....
ce came week....punches fell short...no flow or structure...personals were also week....wordplay was ok i supose...overall...3.5/10...work on it bro...
judge...some good punches some week....flow wasnt there...structure was very basic..wordplay was ok...personals were week...overall....6/10
keep it up both of u....
v/judge (beta by far in y opinion)

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ight i took ma time 2 vote on this merkage so cud yall hit up ma battle plz

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judge you kinda heavy, the cee is rubbish. judge you won this one

^wak vote.................................soz but thx i guess..........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114880


^^^theres ma link 4got 2 drop it

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cause ill leave you feeling colder than winter skinny dipping,
desperate for votes..posts everywhere with his address leaving,
you only do that cuase people sleep on your rhymes...
...............more than evenings.............

^^strong point
the ace, i dunno man.. ya bars are waaayy too short to allow you to insert creativity, you need to set up punches, maybe throw a few personals, but u need a more complex flow too.. maybe lengthen ur bars a bit and work with twistin some words around, judge had a few kool meta's, a decent flow, some kool personals, enough to take the win.. vote-judge

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ce flow pattern wasnt yet 2 been seen it needz 2 step up holla at ur boy ill teach u and whoeva want it im one of the greatest who every decided 2 do this my man judge uz ok but u can step it up 2 holla!!!

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JWalka WHOeva want it