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Old 02-28-04, 12:38 AM   #1
Youngenvy
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Believe it(Freestyle)

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I leave niggas coughin up blood like they was in a gun fight/
Leave there men body twisted like an pretzel 4 a small price/
I can spit 4 days Im like the energizer bunny/
If i die out i got a whole different click comin dummie/
I'll lift ya chest off like F-16's/
Play around and end up like sandra levy b/
See cats jus play around like they really can rap/
Take other rappers ideas and try to spit it like was hot/
See the next nigga who step wrong to me/
will be the same place kennedy is Restin in peace/
I don't got a good heart it ain't hard to figure that out/
i sell powder like it came in a detergent box/
Im the red fox of rap niggas know who I am/
I can put more than uranium in ya cranium/
I be insaner than the rest push ya luck/
Or the cops can find u like the died body's in the city/
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Old 02-28-04, 05:13 AM   #2
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dis was ok 4 a newb......wordplay was nice...didnt have any flow so work on dat..some lines didnt rhyme.....keep it up and keep dropin den...pz

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