im out out for presidents to represent me
im da truth evidently
i cherish da green
i want mad money wish i had money
rappers gettin jacced watch me sticc cash money
i need fast money
weed and hash money im known to stash money
no money useless show me trash money!!
dont care if itz illegal money
cuz i really need da money
roccs in a bag or cracc in a needle money
so i can give my people
cash like elvis doe like da bettles money
shotz destroy ya pelvis
future green or bacc in da pst money
robbin for da cream rapped in a bag money
no matter what it iz i need it bad sonny
stuffn my money sacc like im stuffin my tummy fat
need to get some doe so me and my niggas can split some doe
and when da stash gettin low run out and get some mo
im in love with green paper damn i need paper
but not da type you write on or read paper
but da type you spend and bet with paper
and if ya owe someone get ya necc slit paper
money makez da world turn im a make it keep spinnin
and cop a couple diaomonds da color of pink lemon
ferrari lambo hood rich and jag money
good or bad money if i get a good grip watch me grab money
i'll take da last money jump in a pile like water and see me splash money
and i'll rob jigga if i catch'em on da blocc for his roc piece
drop these and say im hot hole time he screamin he knocced me

Dog you the first wak rapper i've read about,
I hate cats like u,
Want beef dog, WHAT!

I live what I spit,
I spit what I live. That some horrible shit.

dis was wack...evaluate.....no good vocab or mulitups

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that was some wak shit. dawg you seriously need to elevate.

you should get a thesaurus for christmas, cuz ya really need help.

like the others not really feeling it but good idea though.

dont let anyone deter you my friend. i liked your concept, you just need to work on your shit some more. you got potential though. one.

s.v. of the crhyme sindicate

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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.